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    I'd like to have your help with the grammar and wordchoice of this song i wrote. note i wrote it for a girl... which means she has to sing it...

    You have the eyes of an angel
    and the smile of a god
    The voice of a gospel choire
    and a perfect body as cherry on top

    But when I look into your eyes
    There is something I miss
    The sparkle is gone
    and it seems void of happiness
    When I see you smile
    There is something I miss
    It is not sincere anymore
    and it has something forced in it

    Longer and longer
    Memories fade away
    I can barely remember
    How it was back in the days

    You come home and i see
    lipgloss on your shirt
    I smell a perfume i didn't buy
    I'm sorry baby, you got caught

    But when I look into your eyes
    There is something I miss
    The sparkle is gone
    and it seems void of happiness
    When I see you smile
    There is something I miss
    It is not sincere anymore
    and it has something forced in it

    Longer and longer
    Memories fade away
    I can barely remember
    How it was back in the days

    What did you believe I would do
    Did you honestly think I had no clue
    Honey, it hurts me more than it hurts you

    Longer and longer
    Memories fade away
    I can barely remember
    How it was back in the days
    Last edited by The Stranger; 09-21-2006 at 15:50.

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