Just some advice, it feels quite "wishy-washy"; try to be concise and curt while avoiding words such as "good", "better", and so on.
EDIT: What is the question?
Re: Can someone PLEASE spellcheck this for me.
Just some advice, it feels quite "wishy-washy"; try to be concise and curt while avoiding words such as "good", "better", and so on.
EDIT: What is the question?
Last edited by naut; 01-11-2007 at 04:36.
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Some piously affirm: "The truth is such and such. I know! I see!"
And hold that everything depends upon having the “right” religion.
But when one really knows, one has no need of religion. - Mahavyuha Sutra
Freedom necessarily involves risk. - Alan Watts
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