For Those Lost (Poem)

[Del Arroyo]

For Those Lost

For those whom I lost,
Taken vastly 'fore their time;
Celestially played, a composed cost,
[And with your soul,] well rehearsed, brought about an ending chime.

While you sought naught but peace,
That final peace naught but sought you;
Fleet footed winds dawned an untimely cease,
[Amity departing,] our hearts in tow.

For those whom I lost,
Taken vastly 'fore their time,
Composed, rehearsed, celestially played,
Who now rest beyond the ending chime.

While you sought naught but peace,
That final peace naught but sought you;
Fleet footed winds dawned an untimely cease,
Warmth fading, our hearts say adieu.

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Just some ideas. I like the main thrust of the poem, seems like you have a good start.