César Victor's "Great Generals" AAR

**César Victor** · 02-03-2007, 17:04

I was inspired by a fellow forumer (anyone want to guess who?) to make my own. I'm not going to do this as often as I'd like because I want to get on with playing the game. Everytime a new general who I think is worthy of one comes along, I'll make one. For now though, this will do.

Secundus Chaerea, Julii General

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

There may be the odd typo but I think I made all the right corrections. In the future I'm gonna make a longer one like Barbarossa but I thought I'd give it a shot as I like making things like this.

This story is completely true, taken from my current Julii campaign, but some of the pictures needed to be remade in custom battle.

Any comments would be appreciated.

Cés

**Omanes Alexandrapolites** · 02-03-2007, 17:12

Well done, great story of the life of one great man Ceasar Victor!

In the end how many command stars/management scrolls/influence wreaths did your favourite veteran receive?

**Caius** · 02-03-2007, 17:44

How you make that presentations?

**Poulp'** · 02-03-2007, 17:51

I like the autobiography-like style.
And the sepia coloured pages really give the feeling of olds pictures, memories...
Making the story with a 60 years hindsight must have been difficult ?

overall,
Trully a promising AAR !

Just one point you should work out in your next AAR; explain how your main character got into the Julii family (I know Secundus married a daughter, but how did he stood out of the crowds of pretenders in her father's eyes)

and maybe you could insert a map to show his travels

Keep up the good work

**Roman_Man#3** · 02-03-2007, 18:05

those are very good. Keep up the good work.

**César Victor** · 02-03-2007, 19:44

and maybe you could insert a map to show his travels

There were a few things I omitted from the story and this was one of them. I wanted to keep it to five pages so I cut a few things to make sure it fit. I'll keep the suggestions made in mind for the next one I make. Thanks.

In the end how many command stars/management scrolls/influence wreaths did your favourite veteran receive?

Not my finest general ever but he is my most favourite. The Flavius Julius character mentioned in the story was my finest.