Custom intro video for EB-need opinions + feedback

[Obelics]

downloading it, feedback coming soon...

edit: the only problem is that is downloading 13kb per second... so feedback coming not very soon...

ok here's the feedback:
overall rating: good (but not exceptional)

the first part is very good (the intro)
but the last scenes are a sort of random. For example the scene when the iberian assault infantry throw their astae to the polibian triari seem to be put there just randomly, and the triary advance towards the iberians, not charging, just as suicide cannon foodder, so the scene seems comic instead to be epic.
And the whole film, after you have completed it all, seems to not have a coherent story, just a random view of cut scenes (and this cut scenes are not epic, the best is that with the gallic general marcing, the worst is that with the triari vs iberians, and that of the hetaroi marching, who looks streched vertically).

Sorry if i make some criticism, but you sayd honest feedback, and i liked very much the first part, and the whole think gave me a great excitement, cause im very very thirsty to see EB intro sscenes.
So in the end, id say that it could be an official intro, but it has potential to be better.

Anyway even so, it is better than nothink and id like to have it as an EB intro (the part with the EB map is great, but im not sure on the didascalics, cause im not good on english).

for what they can count, my praises for your effort

EDIT: please if you can do an intro for every faction, do it, there is always time for improvements, and the important think is to have it i think.