i think its very good, it gets me pumped to play a campaign for sure.
The fight scenes seem to play out well too (considering the RTW engine)
I have some suggestions regarding the text though:
1. group as many as you can together, so new text isnt popping up every 2 seconds
2. remove the quotes. no need for example "barbarians" (call them celtic and germanic tribes)
3.move the text to the top or bottom, if you want it in the middle, make it bolder
if you follow those suggestions, theres gonna be more text to read when it comes up. You might need to change the sequence of things. The text is interesting so dont mix it with an exciting background.
edit:quotes, not quote...da
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