Custom intro video for EB-need opinions + feedback

[Spoofa]

First impression is that there is good potential there. You have a good build up of tension at the beginning (though the text needs a little work-- what it says, i mean). I myself would up the tempo at the end so the viewer is bombarded with battle scenes one after the other until it climaxes with with a "Europa Barbarorum" logo still-screen-- then fade to black. Basically try to make it so that it is more like, sex. Leave the viewer feeling like they need a cigarette afterwards.

like the vanilla intro?


actually the vanilla theme wasnt too bad, it got me ready to play