The Temple's Colouring Book

[Warmaster Horus]

Indeed. The play format works well.

[naut]

I like your poetry, especially the Prose/Play one. One thing you might want to keep in mind is watch for the rhythm. Sometimes simply changing word endings and order can make all the difference. For example:

Temple lit by moonlight, priest walks up the stair
Lady at the window, face showing despair

I'd change to...

Temple lit by moonlight, priest walks up the stair
Lady at the window, her face shows despair

As "-ing" endings have a caesuric effect on the rhythm.