Indeed. The play format works well.
Indeed. The play format works well.
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I like your poetry, especially the Prose/Play one. One thing you might want to keep in mind is watch for the rhythm. Sometimes simply changing word endings and order can make all the difference. For example:
I'd change to...Originally Posted by Orb
As "-ing" endings have a caesuric effect on the rhythm.Originally Posted by Orb
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