EB Romani Intro: Second try

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Hello fellow EB players!
Here is my second attempt to publish an intro for the EB Romani's.
The first one was over at TWC and we(me and hooahguy) got pretty bad feedback, especially about the audio.
So now we even have two variation(one recorded by me and then editied, meaning it's not my real voice) and a second one by hooahguy(edited as well).
So I really do hope you like this one better, because it was pretty complicated making it.
And by the way, someone at twc said the city I showed was a Greek one, well, I actually did that in the custom battle map "Rome", the thread over at twc was deleted by a database error, unfortunately.
So well, here we go, here are the links:
Me
hooahguy
Due to some confusion: Both videos are in English

And if the feedback about the audio is too bad, I'm just gonna try to make the main intro movie, which will have no voice :)

So have fun with the videos, and don't be shy to suggest what we could've done better, but be polite :D

And don't forget to tell us which one you liked better and why.

Please respond, we really need feedback ;)