Alright, nice work here.

I liked Hooahguy's better, and I'll tell you why: he has the more mature voice of you two. It's deeper and more convincing. Name, your voice in the first movie sounds like you're trying too much to sound 'big', if you get what I mean.

Now I do want to add that I admire your efforts and guts. I would be embarrassed beyond control if I had to do a voice over like this. I have difficulty with people reading my school papers (History major), because I think they will think they suck. I have it even more so with voices. So, guys: awesome job and please keep improving it!