EB Romani Intro: Second try

[Hooahguy]

hooahguy14, it wasn't as bad as the original (I think) but I could still hear your accent and it really gets in the way. You also sound like you have a blocked nose, but that might just be your voice, I don't know. Next, your whole speech had an odd restrained quality to it, as if you were afraid to fully commit yourself to the recording - and, needless to say, it didn't help. Also, as other people have pointed out, the "ROme!" thing doesn't work.

im so sorry "I Am Herenow," but i stutter, so i have to restrain my voice a bit.
as for the "Rome" part, i cant really help that- its an american thing.

You do realise that the bit about Carthage is entirely artistic speculation, though?

we based the diplomatic stances on the game, since its presumably very accurate, which im sure it is, and at the start, Carthage is the romanis allies.

have in mind that you asked it in a forum (EB) with über perfectionist all over the place

we would have posted it in the TWC forums, but its kinda "dead" (as in not many people are posting there) so we posted here for the most feedback


overall, thanks for the feedback so far, we would do a third version of the video, but its really quite stressful and i start school in (looks at watch) 4 days...... so it would be really hard to do another one. sorry.