EB Romani Intro: Second try

[Bellum]

NeoSpartan's right, I think. Got to be louder, more assertive.

Also, according to GamingSteve in his podcast, he uses his bathroom because he can't afford a studio or something to that nature. Does him fairly well.

I think the script was ok. If you stick to the speech format, though, and I think you should, it should be even more rhetorical, to make it feel Roman, and more relevent to what's going on.