The Greeks were born to rule the world

**Caius** · 08-19-2007, 23:45

Years ago, Megas Alexandros dominated the whole world. But his empire is gone, and the war started between the sons of Alexander. Years ago, the Seleucid Empire had fallen by the Egyptians. Macedon is doing really well against us. Yes, we wanted war, we have to be the only rulers of the world. We have to start with Macedon, then destroy those treacherous Romans. The Brutii failed. They conquered Apollonia, and they lost. They thought we were so stupid that they started to suffer starvation! They fallen days after, and Apollonia was ours, again. Croton failed to the hands of our Armoured Hoplites, our powerfull fighters. Tarentum, the ex-Bruttian capital, failed when Captain Servius fought us outside the city. Caivs Vulso, fought us in Salona, and they failed horribly.That was the end of the Bruttians.
Scipians will have always our stench of death upon them. They attacked us at Syracuse, and they went home claiming their false gods for mercy, HAH! That was ridiculous. We captured Messana, and Carthage attacked us in Syracuse when we were sieging Messana.

Pontus started to attack us. We lost Halicarnassus, and Pergamun. We need to recover those places as soon as we can.

So far, those years of war were horrible, so many ships sunk in the end of the sea, and our own people died. But, its the time to change that situation.

I promise that our enemies will fail! Follow me, and we, together, will rule the world!
- Antigonos the Honest, when he become the Faction Leader of the Greek City States.

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Well, it will be my AAR. It will start years before, and I will follow this until 14 AC or when I control Rome and 50 provinces.

I want feedback. Thank you

**SSJVegetaTrunks** · 08-20-2007, 01:59

- PICS NAO. In other words, take screenshots. They say a picture is worth a thousand words.
- You had a few grammatical errors. Not anything big, but eh.
- Go into more detail. Make your story come to LIFE. Tell us about your characters, your battles, etc.
- Good luck on your campaign!

**Caius** · 08-20-2007, 02:10

Thank you SSJVegetaTrunks for the advice.-

I just got inspiration from nowhere, plus the campaign is going excellent, and I will bring pics when I'll continue.

**mrdun** · 08-20-2007, 19:49

Keep going, the Greeks fight a lot of wars on many fronts it will certainly be action packed. I do not know how experienced you are with AAR's but I tried one- Julii short campaign... dreadful. anyway it ounds like a good start well done.

**Caius** · 08-20-2007, 21:59

I do not know how experienced you are with AAR's

I'm not good writing, Im not a natural english speaker nor writer and that is shown in the AAR's I write.

**SSJVegetaTrunks** · 08-21-2007, 17:40

I enjoy writing AARs. I'm in the middle of one now.

**Stuperman** · 08-21-2007, 18:42

Be sure to post some pics of your empire as it expands, either from the minimap or Strat Map, or both. I like watching people's empires expand as they go.

Nice start, can't wait to see the greeks re-take Asia Minor!