Text narration intro.

**name** · 08-20-2007, 02:54

Sorry for opening another thread on this, but I've spent the whole night doing this, so I also want you to tell me how it is. I know that there are some "bugs" in the writing(like the position), those are fixed in my local version, but I did not want to upload it again.
So here we go:
http://www.dailymotion.com/segfaulthunter/video/4692153
Let the flame start(again :P)

**sgsandor** · 08-20-2007, 03:05

I like it alot better with the text

**name** · 08-20-2007, 03:08

Originally Posted by sgsandor

I like it alot better with the text

Thank you a lot.

I was trying to make the "FOR ROME" fly in from the front, but i don't think my software is able to do it ;(
I was able to do something similar, so here is another one for you:
http://www.dailymotion.com/segfaulth...est_videogames

**Thaatu** · 08-20-2007, 09:53

I agree it's a lot better. Just some work on the timing, the grammar and the font and such. Also, the floating banners would be best to turn off.

About the content of the movie itself, you should show a few flashes from battles that have been, like against Celts and Samnites. And choose the units you use carefully. Those Carthaginian armoured elephants don't fit too well.

You should first choose the music, then write the narrative and only then start building the movie together with suitable clips. At least that's what I'd do.