Gah. Meant Makedonian. Sorry. Take out the τε και Αλεξανδρου and it could work for KH, I suppose.
And yes, I know it doesn't scan. I figure a general would be less concerned with that than with the sentiment. Though if you want something that scans, "Υιους αειδε, θεα, Πηληιαδεω Αχιληος" works and is actually closer to the source quote... maybe better for a KH chap.
My lack of proximity to my sources is driving me nuts; Perseus can only take you so far... oh well, back to the States in a few months and I'll be much better set.
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