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  1. 09-20-2007, 12:26 #1
    Prince Cobra
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    Default Re: End of an Era

    I disagree - your story is far from being mediocre. The main disadvantage of your story was the fact it did not say anything new. However, most stories do not, either. Otherwise, I think you have a good style and potential for improving yourself. If you think of a good plot, your story will be very good.
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    Default Re: End of an Era

    Thanks

    I'm not planning to continue it though, not much of a writer and 6th form work right now is killing me.
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