World in Conflict

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The title can't be missed

Nice story, telling from first person perspective is good. However, you might also want to tell story from the third-person perspective.

While it is interesting to hear story of soldiers from the front-line (battlefield), you might also want to tell about what actually happen within both Kremlin and White House. Political decisions, plot, commander briefing, hidden agenda, secret deal, conspiracy (might be ), and such, therefore the audience know more and get the "bigger picture" about the situation. You can also tell about story from both navy and air force view (sailors and pilots)

Also, I am kind of confused with the timeline in the story, are they supposed to take place long after the other? For example in Orange-12 Alpha, was the martial law took place long after the war ended, or was it took place when the war still raging on? (AFAIK, Paris and other French cities were captured by the Soviets some time during the 'game')

Well, that's just my opinion. I like "what-if" Cold War and WW3 hyphotethical scenarios. Try to put the story in your signature, maybe that'll attract more people's attention?