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    Another Makedonian AAR? - you may ask. Yes, but slightly different. I hope you will enjoy.

    There are no pictures in introduction, but it will change from the next chapter (maybe I'll also add new ones to introduction later)
    English is not my primary language so please forgive me the errors.

    Spears of Gorgias - 1. Introduction

    Neoptolemos stared through the window. He concluded that, finally, another boring day was going to end, as the shadows on small courtyard of the administrative building of the temple of Darron were long and small patches of the western sky were getting dark. Being 20 years old Neoptolemos was not very fond of his work. Yet on the other hand, it was not that bad. However tedious copying of temple bills and lists of possessions was, it was not to be compared with manual labour of slaves and some of foreigners in the port and storehouses of a city.

    He himself also was a foreigner, xenos, in this city. His family descended from Epirus, from the lands of the Thesprotoi. In his childhood Neoptolemos many times had been listening to stories of the lost homeland, breathtaking mountains and hills covered with flocks of sheep. Other stories were also told, when he was older. The stories about the honour and greed, an old statesman and an evil king, stories about murder and miraculous escape.

    Those stories were mostly centred around his grandfather, also called Neoptolemos, who was an important man among his ethnos. When king Pyrrhos returned from his disastrous campaign in Italy, he ordered to increase taxes and levy new, young men into depleted royal army. He, in his greed and desire for glory, did not understand that his country had already been drained. The best men were dead or incapacitated from their wounds, and others just wanted to live in peace. That was why Neoptolemos senior, in the name of all Thesprotoi tried to convince the king to postpone his aggressive plans. Yet Pyrrhos didn’t want to listen. He killed the old man and ordered that his family should follow. They were saved from the king’s men only by an anonymous leaflet nailed at the door. Packing few personal belongings and a small sum of money his parents fled east.

    After dangerous journey through the mountains in late autumn, when the frizzing blow of Boreas was covering the passes with snow they finally reached Pella. This is where the stories ended. Here they settled, and here Neoptolemos grown up. His father, Sostrathos, after trying few other professions, hired himself as mercenary solder in the Macedonian army and from that time he was uncommon guest in the house they rent. Only occasional letters and half of his salary paid by royal official from time to time assured he is alive. Just a year later Pyrrhos was a king of Pella too, but it didn’t last for long – his garrison was thrown away after 2 years by levy force under the command of Halkyoneus, son of Macedonian king Antigonos Gonatas. As the next year’s punitive expedition of Pyrrhos failed (thanks to him falling from horse and braking a few bones) the Macedonia was now secured under Antigonid rule.

    That year, first year of 127 Olympiad was to be remembered by Neoptolemos as his first year at schools. His father always insisted on this, and he reserved better part of the money taken from old home to this purpose. Yet the only teacher they were able to hire was an old philosopher, almost constantly drunk. How he was not excluded from Gymnasium because of this was always puzzling Neoptolemos. He recall that the one guy told him that his teacher wrote some book, and become famous because of this, but he was not tempted to believe. Yet his teacher wasn’t that bad tutor, and Neoptolemos was a good student. He liked books, especially those about distant lands and great warriors, and wasn’t bad in arithmetic too. But one thing where he excelled was javelin throwing. He even won a olive wreath once, defeating all those proud Macedonians – a great honour indeed.

    From one exercise he, as xenos, was excluded. All Macedonians from the age of 15 trained pike drill. Marching, keeping formation and few basic commands for the efebes (up to 17) and complicated manoeuvres and heavy physical training for older – the neoi. Neoptolemos once held the sarissa, when his friend Pantauchos gave it him for a while. Surprisingly it was much, much lighter than Neoptolemos expected, and very well balanced in battle position (levelled). In upright, marching position it was much bigger problem because of the enormous length, and he could just barely imagine how a man can march 150 stades (28km) in an day, carrying not only a sarissa but also helmet, shield, greaves, knife and supplies. Yet that was what Macedonian neoi were supposed to do.

    “By the way, where Pantauchos may be now?” – thought Neoptolemos – “I haven’t seen him for a long while. Maybe he was drafted for the royal army that was fighting in Epirus? I hope he...”

    Suddenly he heard somebody shouting. Automatically bent toward the table trying to simulate that he is working “Here you have the punishment for daydreaming” crossed his mind “now the supervisor will get you” But nothing happened, except few more shouts and sound of fast steps on the courtyard. Seconds later door were opened with a force that almost pulled them out from position Neoptolemos glanced toward them – just to see Megakles, the priest and his direct superior. He never had seen him so excited

    “Come out” Megakles shouted “Hymnos had called public meeting on the agora, some very important news he has. Some say that king Halkyoneus won a great victory and conquered Epiros!”

    Neoptolemos quickly packed few things, and rushed to the courtyard. Here he met few other temple workers already discussing the topic with excitation. Bypassing them and walking through vaulted doorway he entered main part of temple, where three shrines and the sacred, healing spring of Daron were located. Here too people were already discussing the news, both priests and visitors who happened to be in the temple. He responded briefly to some greetings and entered a street. From here he proceeded north through straight roads towards agora. As he was closing the houses became more impressive, being homes for the elite of Pella and for Macedonian nobles. Sometimes through opened door he could see interior walls covered with paintings and marvellous mosaic floors.

    “It really must be important news” – Neoptolemos thought – “if it is Hymnos who will deliver message. After all, he is the youngest brother of Halkyoneus and in absence of his older brothers the king’s representative. If it was something minor, he would use herald or leave it to city magistrates.”

    The western entrance to agora was passing through columned gate. While still impressive, upon closer examination revealed that it seriously needed repair – not strange since it was erected some 80 years before by the great king Philippos. In many places painted stucco decorations had fallen off showing poros stone that was used in construction. On the contrary steps, made from good quality marble were still in very good condition.

    When he entered Agora he saw that quite a sizable crowd gathered there already. People were mainly standing on the north part, as they tried to get as close as possible to buildings of magistrate, where they expected Hymnos to appear. Neoptolemos quickly walked towards the crowds looking around in a search for a nice place to stand. Before long he spotted that the base of so called “Phyrros’s Raider” was not yet occupied. Too high for the kids, it was perfect place to look over the heads of the crowd so he grabbed the occasion and climbed up. Over him towered natural-sized bronze statue of cavalryman charging for battle. Nobody can doubt it was marvellous piece of art, and this was the sole reason it was left standing, as when king Antigonos wanted it removed the city archontes, backed by vote of assembly, rejected offering instead that dedication would be removed and new one inserted at the expense of the city. So now it read “From king Antigonos and the Pellaians to the Zeus Olimpios” but people still called it “Phyrros’s Raider”.

    From this elevated position whole agora was visible, with all its statues and with shops surrounding it on the west, east and south side. Below him crowd was thickening as information had spread throughout the city. Slowly also the elites started to gather – nobles in their characteristic yellow cloaks as well as rich citizens in adorned red or blue ones. They obviously hadn’t stopped at the outskirts of crowd, but pushed forward to the first rows.

    Finally the trumpet sounded and eyes of everybody concentrated on the building of magistrate. The guards opened the doors and Hymnos walked out, followed by Sosipatros the hypepistates, all fife dikestai – Menandros, Nikodemos, Philodemos, Hippas and Pauson and Protogenes, one of the treasurers. In the silence that allowed the footsteps to be heard everybody waited. Hymnos for a short while seemed to listen to that unusual silence before he finally started reading:

    “From the king Halkyoneus to Macedonians. Chairete! In the first regal year, on the 2nd of Daisios (May)...
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    Wow wow wow!

    I really like the way you write. It really opens that feel with the character, much like you are reading a book (which I always had trouble with online).

    This is just pure awesomeness!
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    A great Makedonian AAR if I ever saw one.


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    This looks very promising, I'm already excited about the next chapter
    BTW, the main character, is he a family member who you bribed from Epeiros or is he a fictional character, not represented in the game?

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    Neoptolemos is fictional character, not FM. Although if it was under my control he would appear at some point.

    I can make him appear as "scripted" general though... Nice idea, but definately for much, much later. At this point he is not even a solider...

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    Thanks for kind words guys. Second chapter:

    Spears of Gorgias - 2. King's letter

    “From the king Halkyoneus to Macedonians. Chaireite! In the first regal year, on the 2nd of Daisios (May). At the 11th of Artemisios (April)Macedonian army marched south from Epidamos. Gathered forces consisted of Bottian and Amphaxian strategiai of Macedonians, Sacred Ile numbering 330 men and 385 other Macedonian Hippeis. With those marched 3 chilarchiai of mercenary thureophoroi, 2000 Achaians, Arkadians and Atintanians supported by 1600 allies and mercenaries from Krete. On the 15th of Artemisios army arrived at the territory of Greek city of Apollonia where the king was met by emissaries from that city offering provisions and help under the term of preserving city freedom. King accepted proposition, but stressed the fleet should be allowed in the port of Apollonia.



    After that army turned inland, marching up the valley of Aoos river. Upon closing to the Dodona scouts spotted the royal army of Epirus led by the king Alexandros and his son Pyrrichos It was revealed that enemy had gathered 15000 infantry and 1800 cavalry. It included 5000 men armed in the Macedonian manner, 8000 light armed Epirotes, Akarnanians and Aetolians, 1600 Byllones, Amantes and other Illyrians, while cavalry numbered 1600 elite Epirotes, 1000 mercenary hippies and 1000 Aetolian and Illyrian hippakontistai. On the next day – 23rd of Artemisios light armed clashed while both armies remained in the camps. Such situation continued for two next days during which Macedonian army deployed for battle while Epirotes stayed behind their walls. Finally on the 26th Epirotes deployed in battle line and the battle followed.







    This had been decisively won thanks to great skill of Macedonians. During battle Aleksander son of Phyrros died fighting bravely and with him 5200 Epirotes, while another 3600 were captured.



    After this success army marched towards Ambrakia where last forces of Pyrrichos gathered numbering 430 cavalry and 3600 infantry. Emissary had been sent proposing peace terms: Pyrrichos will keep the throne and become an ally of Makedonia, he will swear never to initiate a war towards Makedonia or any of her allies, he will support Halkyoneus and all his descendants with troops or money, as much as he will be able, at every inquire. This generous offer had been turned down and so Macedonian army was forced to lay siege to the Ambrakia, that should end soon.
    Those that distinguished themselves in the battle of Dodona: Ile from Emathia under Paterinos son of Antigonos; Macedonians from Thessalonike, Gortynia, Sindos, Apollonia, Mieza, Edessa and Pella under respectively Deinas son of Eudikos, Hippostratos son of Kalippos, Armenos son of Botrichos, Sosimenes son of Aganor, Pantauchos son of Blakros, Nikias son of Hermon and Harpalos son of Polemios. Special mention should be made for mercenaries under Gorgias from Kos who, while holding right flank of the army against heavy enemy assault lost 327 men dead including the hegemon and 543 wounded. To celebrate...”


    Neoptolemos was no longer listening. His mind could only recognise the words: “mercenaries of Gorgias – 327 dead, 543 wounded”. He could not think about anything else. His father was in that unit, tetrarches of second tetrarchia in first pentekontarchia. Now the unit of his father was almost completely destroyed. 327 dead, 543 wounded means that after the battle only 200 men were standing from whole chilarchia. “Is my father among survivors?” became immediately the most important question for Neoptolemos. Yet there was no answer. “What answer could I get? How?” Suddenly he thought about the mother. She should hear this news from her son, not from some stranger.

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    Will read your story, which I believe in advance is great (judging from the introduction) later. Just stopped to thank you for the map.
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    And some Makedonian months to celebrate the new year with...
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ancient...onian_calendar

    I believe that now we are in the first moon of Peritios...



    "peritos" in modern greek means "unneeded". Judging by how cold it has been, it surely is...
    It also means odd (opposite of even), which is probably is ancient Makedonian meaning as well


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    Hi! As my net connection returned after some problems I can finally post chapter III

    Spears of Gorgias - Chapter 3. Messenger

    Loosing no time Neoptolemos jumped down from the pedestal and started pushing his way through crowds, but due to large number of people it took quite a while. When he finally freed himself from thick mass of people he started running. Not looking around, he run through the eastern gate of agora and further south and east, chased by curses and shouts of people he pushed or knocked over. Around 15 minutes later he finally reached home.

    The sun was setting and the last reflections were lighting highest rows of roof tiles, while street was already dark. He checked the door of the shop, but found it closed so he entered the main corridor. In the flickering light of small lamp on the left wall he knocked to the door of small flat they rented. After short while those were opened by his younger sister, Kleopatra.

    “Hi, you are quite early today” she said happily letting him in “We are preparing the dinner, will you help? We have just started as a guy came to the shop when we were closing to order the peplos for his wife. Obviously he ...” Kleopatra paused looking at him “You aren’t listening to me, are you?”

    Neoptolemos hadn’t answered, but headed directly to the mother who was preparing lentils and peas for a soup. She looked into his face and in this very moment her face changed.

    “What had happened?” she whispered.
    “There was a battle in Epirus...” he started slowly “and ... and dad’s unit ... it took great casualties”
    “Who won? How big were the casualties?”
    “Macedonians won. More than three in ten died, fife in ten were wounded”
    Mother heaved a sigh.
    “There is still hope” she said “seven in ten survived and they were able to collect wounded, may Asklepios protect them. Tomorrow you should try to find some information, maybe somebody already returned”.
    Rest of that evening they were very silent.


    Next morning, just after sun had appeared on the sky Neoptolemos walked towards agora, where he hoped to find more information. Lots of people were there, discussing current news, both on the agora and on the streets. King announced 3 days of celebrations, so processions were marching through the streets from one temple to the other. But gaining valuable and what is more important somewhat reliable information was not easy. Rumours were spreading all over the city as always, when only few facts are available, many people fill the holes with imagination. And so some were talking that at some point in the battle both kings met face to face and Halkyoneus killed Alexander in single combat. Even such details were added as information that Alexander wounded the king twice before Halkyoneus had been finally able to hit him in the face with butt of broken xyston. Others were vehemently disagreeing, claiming no such situation occurred, and that Alexander died fighting phalanx. Or Ile of Emathia. One Kretan trader even started spreading claims that the Kretans from Gortynia not Macedonians from the city bearing the same name were those who distinguished themselves and that they killed Alexander. This almost resulted in brawl as three drunken Gortynians who happened to pass by decided to defend the honour of their city. The guards were forced to intervene and separate them. Gortynians were arrested to be delivered before court and Kretan was told to shut up or leave the city. Murmuring he returned to his booth. Neoptolemos was slowly becoming lost in the tangle of opposing information. To make things worse seemingly every minute he was meeting some friends who without exception were celebrating and tried to invite Neoptolemos for a drink or for a party.

    Finally in the late afternoon he began thinking about possible ways to contact king’s emissary. So he started walking in front of magistrate and at one moment he spotted that guards left so he cautiously climbed the steps and glanced inside. Nobody.

    “Maybe if I’d enter I could find the emissary” – he thought. Although this idea was somewhat crazy, he grasped this possibility. So he slowly slipped in.
    “What the ... are you doing? Who are you?”
    Neoptolemos nervously looked around. In the entrance to the side room stood officer of the guard. In a purple, linen parade cuirass, yellow-purple cloak and well decorated helmet he looked truly impressive. Behind him stood two guardsmen.
    “I... I am trying to find some info” Neoptolemos stammered “info about my father who is in the royal army”
    “Don’t you know you need permission to enter here? Get lost!” – officer replied – “And if I’ll see you again I will not be polite anymore!”

    Neoptolemos retreated from the building followed by guardsmen who watched if he will not try to enter again. For the rest of the day he was waking aimlessly around the city. As the night started to fall upon Neoptolemos dragged himself on towards home, exhausted and sad.

    Approaching, he spotted his mother standing in front of the entrance. She looked like she was waiting for him to arrive. Coming closer he saw that she seemed she aged 10 years in 10 hours.

    “Mom what happened? Why are you so sad?”
    “Royal messenger was here” - she said with breaking voice.
    “What?I mean I had been searching for info whole day and he simply came here? What did he say?” Neoptolemos felt the information would not be one he would want to hear, but he just had to ask.
    “You are ordered to go to Epirus”
    “What?”
    “This is the king’s order”
    “But what does this mean? Why the king need me there? Why the king need me at all? And what about the dad?”
    His mother looked deeply in his eyes “He only said you should arrive in king’s camp at Ambrakia as soon as possible. When I tried to ask him more he claimed that the original messenger fell ill in Edessa, and so he has no knowledge besides the letters and notes he was given.”
    “Well, that mean I’ll have to go... go ad find out myself what happened to dad.” Neoptolemos said.
    “I don’t like this idea, but what could I do? Royal order is royal order after all...” replied his mother “It would be difficult journey, even more so as I can’t give you much money, we are almost broke now. i'll give you as much as I can.”
    “No need for that. I’m young and I can take care of myself”
    “Come in, dinner is waiting” his mother said “we need to discuss it more thoroughly”.
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    Great story O'ETAIPOS

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    thumbs up, enjoyable stuff so far.
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    And another Makedonian tidbit for me...

    http://epigraphy.packhum.org/inscrip...rea%3DBottiaia

    "εκ Πέλλης
    στάδιοι
    είκοσι"

    meaning
    "from Pella
    stadia 20"


    This is what Neoptolemos would have read as he would walk further from Pella.


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    CH4 - Polemaios


    A day later at the early morning Neoptolemos left the house. His mother stood in the door watching as he was walking away. At the corner he turned head to look at her and waved for the last time. Some part of him was really excited – the journey, no matter how difficult, would be great adventure, incomparable to anything in his life. He will see the mountains in their full greatness and at the end he will see – at last – the country of his ancestors. The other part though was frightened, or even more – terrified – as the road in front of him was not simply a walk in the countryside. Many dangers awaited in the mountains – from changing weather and broken roads to wild animals and even more dangerous human. Many wolf packs roamed on the hills, boars were also very dangerous and in some places even lions appeared. If that wasn’t enough, now, during the war, many bands of Illyrians from different tribes infiltrated borders of the kingdom. And there always were common bandits hiding in remote places. Still, beside all those dangers, the enthusiastic part in Neoptolemos’s heart was dominant and as usually he was looking in the future with optimism. After all he was well prepared for the journey – clad in good, long cloak made by his mother to protect against cold nights and fastened on the right shoulder, good sandals and wide brimmed thessalian hat. He carried a bag filled with most important personal belongings, some bread and a little money. He took javelin, that his father left in home sometime ago, to serve as walking stick, for protection, and in a hope to hunt, if the food was scarce.

    For first two days he marched through the heartland of Macedonia – plains of Emathia. Walking was easy here thanks to good quality royal road running all the way to Edessa. That great city impressed Neoptolemos by its beauty and marvellous surroundings. The road first lead through vast cemeteries marked with rows after rows of stelai and pediments with statues and then the view opened on the main city, laying on the plain and protected by sturdy walls. Over it, on an impressive hill, acropolis was located with awe-inspiring temples and public buildings. Yet, as Neoptolemos quickly discovered, the city was much smaller than royal Pella. Arriving around midday he spent rest of the day sightseeing and toward the evening found a place to sleep in the house of some old couple. On the next day, when he left the city, the travel became much more difficult as hills started just behind Edessa, and the road was much worse. It now lead through forests and generally farther from the city the more wild areas were around.

    In the late evening he descended from the hills to shores of lake Begoritis in northern Eordaia and spent a night in the city of Bokeria. From there continued south-west, through well cultivated plains of Eordaia and Elimea. After three days he reached Aiane lying on the edge of valley o Haliakmon. It was quite a big city with many public buildings located on terraces of a hill, and private ones located on the lower part of the slopes and on the plain. Many of the public buildings, as Neoptolemos observed, were looking slightly different to those he was familiar in Makedonia. When he asked people about them they proudly claimed that those buildings come from the time when Elimea was ruled by own kings. They also said that around six generations ago Elimea reached its greatness and fielded best cavalry in Greece, but later Illyrian raids devastated it and they were forced to seek protection of the king of Macedonians – Philip the Great.

    Leaving behind cultivated plains Neoptolemos kept pushing south-west. After two days in Haliakmon valley he started again ascend mountains – this time in Tymphaea. Those lands never were highly populated, and now it was border zone between Makedonia and Epirus for better part of last 10 years so most of the people moved from here to some safer lands. Far, on the southern and western horizon white cliffs appeared marking the main mountain range. Here Neoptolemos was for the first time forced to gather food on the way, as the vast forests covered those mountains, and bigger settlements disappeared. Only from time to time some abandoned hut appeared by the road. Everything looked wild and he was meeting many animals even close to the main “royal” road. This name though was a bit misleading – road was there, that’s true, but it could be seen that nobody taken care of it for a long time. Forrest was slowly regaining lost ground – bushes grown densely on the edges and in many places even on it, effectively narrowing it to a barely visible path. Ages old oak trees shaded everything under their huge crowns. This even made vegetation around and on the road denser, and it was a place where more light was available so here young oaks, cypresses and pines grown in lush manner. Only small strips of road were flat – usually on tops of the hills. In most other places it was constantly either ascending or descending hill slopes. This obviously added to wildness of place, as never longer part of road was visible, as it was custom of straight royal roads on the plains, even in wooded places. In some places narrow, but deep valleys forced the road to descend sharply just to climb again in switchbacks. Only occasional remains of fireplaces scattered on the sides reminded, that people were still using this route from time to time.

    On the third day, when walking on the top of small ridge, with slopes falling sharply just few steps from the original road width, Neoptolemos suddenly heard rattle of horse hooves and few minutes later he was bypassed by a horseman, and not long later by three another, all moving in the same direction. But they vanished as fast as they appeared, and forest was again silent. On the same day he spotted that his reserve of food was decreasing way too fast, even taking account for the occasional berries and walnuts he was able to find, and that he will have to hunt. First he tried with deer that appeared close, but he was not able to come close enough to use javelin, and he was also afraid to lose the path.

    On the second day he become desperate to hunt something. This time he tried with rabbits but again they were able to run away before he could even think of reaching them. It was almost the night when he finally gave up and sat on the ground tired and discouraged. He realised that he is quite far from the road and that he lost a day and haven’t moved much forward.

    Then, suddenly he heard some shouting and thought
    “There are some people. Maybe I could get some food from them?”

    So he started sneaking toward the direction of voices. He realised the voices are coming from just behind the crown of a hill. After a while he spotted light of the fire and its reflections on the nearby pines. Now he also heard bursts of laughter and something like singing. He was able to recognise the words, but they were speaking in a language he could not understand, at least not the major part. Realising that he crept cautiously to the edge of the bushes.

    The scene he saw on a small clearing shook him deeply. In front of him, less than 20 meters away laid a camp of bandits. There were five of them sitting around big campfire. Clad in variety of cloths, there was no way to guess from where they came, but at least two of them looked Illyrian, while one sitting in centre had fair hair typical for Galtians. Everywhere around them laid weapons and bags and on the other end of the clearing he could see some horses. Beside them Neoptolemos spotted somebody else. A prisoner stood there with hands tied above the head by a rope wrapped around a branch and then tied to a trunk of fallen tree. His torn chiton and easily visible bruises clearly told that he had not been taken easily.
    “Gods, that is what my mother was me warning against!” thought Neoptolemos “He seems not older than me! How much would I want to help him... But how could I? There are five bandits and each of them can easily finish me off. What should I do? Oh Gods, help me!”

    Suddenly one of the bandits stood up and walked towards prisoner. Now Neoptolemos could easily see that the guy is drunk. He could walk straight only with greatest difficulty. He also seemed to be the leader of others as all of them were watching at him. He shouted something toward prisoner pointing on his comrades as it was resembling greek, Neoptolemos was able to understand least some bits: “You kill our companion, ... you pay for it ... die slowly!”. The ringleader shouted that few times, and some other things in not understandable language and finally drawn his terrible looking sica.

    “Oh Herakles, protector of the brave, help me” Neoptolemos thought and sprang up. In one fluid movement he raised javelin to throwing position and hurled it at enemy chief. Not looking if he hit or not he charged from the bushes whirling his bag above the head.

    The javelin hadn’t missed and a sica fell from the ringleader’s hand. He also fell, like the tree under the hand of skilled woodcutter, with javelin head buried deep in the chest. For few seconds his legs were still kicking the ground before he finally silenced.

    Shock of this unexpected event and amount of wine had slowed remaining bandits for few seconds. The all-important few seconds. When they finally become aware what is happening Neoptolemos was upon them. He hit the first one with a bag throwing him back and making him drop the sica. Loosing no time he grabbed it and rushed towards the prisoner. With a single blow he clove the rope holding him up and then grabbed a spear lying on the ground. Now he turned back only to see three bandits moving upon him. They held clubs and swords in hands and on their faces he seen the will of murder. Situation was becoming worse each second, and Neoptolemos, retreating step by step started thinking that this time things would not end good.

    Suddenly he seen a blink of light and the bandit standing in the back fell down with head almost separated from the shoulders with mighty blow. Behind him stood the captive, holding with still tied hands blooded kopis. Neoptolemos yelled and stabbed a bandit in front of him in the face and with the shaft parried a sword blow from another. Shaft broke, but it was not important. Bandit fell with a kopis blade in the heart. Neoptolemos pulled the spear out and stabbed the last one, who had just got up from the ground.
    And suddenly the fight was over. The forest was silent again as the bandits laid dead. Neoptolemos glanced on the man who was captive. He smiled back and all of a sudden reeled. He would fell, hadn’t Neoptolemos jumped forward and held him. Then he led him towards the fire and helped to sit.
    “What’s your name?” asked.
    “Polemaios” he replied and finally lost consciousness.

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    Last chapter updated.

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    Hi! New chapter is done.

    CH5 – Back on the track

    Seeing that Polemaios is unconscious, Neoptolemos carefully laid him on the cloak and with a knife freed his hands from the rope.
    “Oh! Terrible” he thought seeing deep wounds on the wrists “I will need some water to wash the wounds, and some clean fabric to make bandages” So he covered Polemaios with a cloak lying close, got up and started searching the camp. There was astonishingly many goods in the bandit’s packs, from jewellery to weapons.
    “Seems they robbed quite a few people”
    But nothing looked quite clean enough, until in one of the packs he found good quality white chiton with some red applications on the edges.
    “Ok, so now only the water”
    Few canteens he checked until now turned out to be empty, but finally he found one that squelched when shaken.
    “Mmm, wine!” Neoptolemos thought when opened it and for a second he just wanted to tilt the canteen and drink the content, but finally controlled himself.
    “Wine is supposedly better than water for the wounds” he reminded himself “If anything will be left then, and only then I can allow myself to drink it”

    So he returned to Polemaios and with the help of knife torn the chiton to strips suitable for bandaging. Then he said short prayers to Asklepios and Darron and started cleaning and bandaging. First were obviously the wrists, then some bigger injuries on the legs and especially knees, finally followed by other bruises. He also found a lot of clotted blood in the hair, but it seemed quite old – at least a day, so he thought it can wait till the patient would be more helpful.

    “What should I do now?” he thought then ”why actually he fell unconscious? He was fighting well after all. On the other hand, I recall reading something like that, ... ah yes, I remember”
    During his work as a scribe in temple of Darron Neoptolemos had chance to read (during copying) some interesting medical papyri. One of them mentioned that a soldier who fought well in battle may lose consciousness just after that due to many reasons, like over tiring, bleeding from a hidden wound or other similar. It suggested that in such situation the soldier should be examined, and if no wounds of major importance were found just kept warm and allowed to rest.

    “Wounds I had already taken care about. So now he just need heat and rest”
    Realising that Neoptolemos covered his patient with cloak and placed some soft bag under his head.
    With Polemaios secured, he thought about cleaning the camp, so he dragged the bodies to one end of the clearing, opposite to one where horses stood. He also took all weapons and pouches from them. Finishing all those important tasks he finally sat close to the fire and ate dinner from bandit’s reserves. Then he promised himself not to sleep, but instead watch over the wounded. Yet the difficulties of last few days were too big and just after short while he was sleeping.

    He woke up early in the morning. Sun had not yet risen and it was quite cold. At first he suspected that what happened day before was just a dream, but quick glance around him provided quite evident proofs otherwise. Then he spotted the fire had almost went off so he dragged some twigs and branches to re-light it. Then he glanced towards Polemaios and saw he is awake. For a moment their eyes met.
    “Tell me that I’m not dreaming!” Polemaios whispered, as if he didn’t want to frighten the vision away “Tell me that you are real and not just my imagination!”

    Neoptolemos smiled and responded simply: “Yes I am real. And yes, you are free now”
    Polemaios fell back to the bedding “The Gods are merciful” he said looking into brightening sky. Then he turned back toward Neoptolemos “There is no way I can pay you this debt. I can only offer you friendship.”
    “This is a greatest gift than anyone may expect.” Neoptolemos replied ” And do not talk about dept, I just had to help”
    “No, it’s not a normal thing to engage five bandits, alone and with one javelin as only weapon” said Polemaios “I do not know if I’d be brave enough”

    Neopolemos decided it would be best to change subject: “Ok, how do you feel? Is the head hurting badly? I’ve seen a lot of blood”
    “Generally I feel very well, thanks. Wrists hurt a bit, but nothing I can’t bear. The head is ok now, wound is from yesterday’s morning.”

    “Ok, then I change bandages and prepare something to eat.”
    “No, I think we should move. As fast as possible”
    “What?” Neoptolemos looked on Polemaios like if he was a madman “You have to rest. There is enough supplies in the camp to stay here for two or so days”
    “We can’t stay here. The corpses and the blood in the soil will attract wild animals. And I do not think you would like the smell when the corpses will start to decay, and they will start soon, I guarantee you.”
    Neoptolemos hadn’t expected such answer. But yes, thinking about that again both points were quite logical. He still had doubts though, but Polemaios had already stood up. Despite claims about feeling good, quick grimace appeared on his face while he was raising. Then he started searching the bags. Neoptolemos shook his head and started picking out food for breakfast.
    “Hey” Shout from behind made him turn back. At first he didn’t believed his eyes - instead of miserable prisoner form yesterday he saw a young makedonian noble. Marvellous yellow-purple cloak covering torn chiton and handle of decorated kopis under left arm changed his appearance dramatically.
    “Sorry for my lack of manners, I haven’t gave you my name...”
    “Yes, you had” Neoptolemos replied “yesterday, before you lost consciousness you said your name is Polemaios”
    “Oh, good. I didn’t remember that. In full it would be Polemaios son of Harpalos from Beroia. May I ask what’s your name my friend?”
    “Neoptolemos son of Sostrathos, sir”
    “First thing – never, ever say “sir” to me. You saved my life, my freedom and my honour, I should be saying that to you” Polemaios replied “and we should pack the horses and move, if you are ready.”
    “And what about breakfast?”
    “We will eat on the march, I just don’t want to tease the good will of the Gods any longer, wolfs or even worse, a lion may appear soon”

    And so they headed towards the horses. Polemaios straight away went to one of them, big thessalian, completely black, except for peculiar white mark on forehead. He bowed to the head of the horse and said quietly
    “How do you feel Thunder? Hope they hadn’t hurt you?” and then carefully examined the legs and hoofs.
    Neoptolemos stopped few steps behind. Horses were not a thing he was used to, and so he looked at them with some suspicion. Polemaios, finishing examination of his horse turned back.
    “Neoptoleme! Come and choose a horse for you”
    “I... I don’t know how to say...”
    “Ah, you don’t ride?” Polemaios asked “this is most unfortunate. As soon as we will move out of dangerous zone I’ll try to give you some basic lessons, so we can move faster, but for now wouldn’t you mind if I’d ride?”
    “Had it been possible, I’d have you carried. It would help healing the wounds”

    Then they led the horses to the centre of the camp and put all the bags on them. During the packing they discovered that bandits gathered huge amounts of wealth – in coins, jewellery and weapons. Polemaios discovered something more – two horses had markings identifying them as coming from royal stables. He wondered if those were stolen from messengers, or maybe bandits were deserters?
    “What’s that?” Asked Neoptolemos spotting group of strangely shaped bags
    “Equipment of horseman” Polemaios replied “plate cuirass, long sleeved, galatian style armour, helmet and greaves”
    “How do you move in all of that stuff?”
    “Barely” Polemaios replied with smile “Personally, I’m not sure you actually need all of that, at least as long as you know how to dodge or parry the blows. If your opponent knows his job and you don’t no armour could save you. Yet I imagine it gives good protection against missiles, and well, you do look impressive in that gear!”
    “If you are not sure you need it, then why to drag it with you?”
    “My father ordered it all, according to new fashion that comes from Syria. It was my 19th birthday present, so you understand, I just have to”
    Present for birthday! For Neoptolemos it just looked astonishing. He remembered prices of weapons that traders and blacksmiths displayed on the Pellaian agora, and those were just enormous. Simple javelin, like the one his father left for him was worth 4 drachmae, enough to buy wheat for family for a week! Each of the armour pieces was easily much over the yearly income of their family.
    “And he was just given all that fortune as birthday present!” thought Neoptolemos.

    Finally they had put last bags on the horses and departed. Polemaios was leading, as he was supposed to know the way from bandit campsite to “main” road, while Neoptolemos walked beside last horse to make sure they stay on track. On some places path was well visible, with clear signs of horse hoofs but on the others Polemaios had to dismount and analyse the ground in search for some hints. Neoptolemos was again surprised how few of them his friend needed to locate the way. At last, few hours later, they arrived on the royal road and stopped for a short meal.

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    Great story. Reads like a book.

    To bad that all bandits died instantaneous death.
    In all books, films people usually die instantaneous death unless they are needed for the plot.
    If they would get wounded, even mortal wounded this would present some interesting dilemma and make it more real.

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    I really like your story, now get a new chapter out!

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    Anybody interested in next chapter? (save from keravnos)

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