i dont know... men love your story, ive been visiting your post 3x just to know what happened to 'littanos, if you havent shown me the link well...
you know im not a critic 'cuz, hell how can, i never even write a story not even a short-tiny-little-bit one story, but i know some of us had some stories in our minds when we are playing TW games, specially when were excited about some characters, like when my hier to throne i have sent to relieved my king(all the way straight from england to egypt..10~20turns?.. which had died by the time my hier arrived and lost jerusalem to timurends... ), i decided to stop the timurends on a bridge near egpyt with 2 full stacks of armies, well cutting it short, i lost the battle worst my idiotic hier charge the timurends head-on on the bridge with there elephants rampaging!! i say wtf? sob! well he died, honorably.... after the battle, i wanted to load my games and start again and then... some stories filled my brains and just laugh about it, really wanted to do some AAR for that one but hell i dont know how to write, plus im no english boy im from philippines and my english is as broken as my pen anyway

so to you... im happy that at least you can tell your stories and your good at it, one thing that i love: the way you express the emotions of your character in a funny way-The mercenary’s eyes gleamed with delight. “Now what were you about to order, general?” ha ha ha... just hope there are more of those lines... and if i may please please dont put of the MERCS i beginning to imagine im them he he he he, i know ... but hey i just fell in love with that line.... hey how about another battle with the mercs and then maybe in the end of all this the mercs well change heart and follow 'littanos wirh devotions.. nice hu?


so general where do you want us to be??? now that we have won the battle