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    The Persian Homeland

    We no longer had any allied armies to reinforce our army but the
    supply lines behind us were safe and the new army was well
    rested. General Antigonos was ready for the next move and
    ordered the army over the mountains. There were signs of
    defensive positions on the "Persian Gates" but the few men
    stationing them retreated as soon as they saw us. There was
    no resistance at all.

    Once out of the mountains, we began moving northeast. Once
    out of the mountains, Antigonos ordered the army to begin looting
    the villages and towns. He was trying to draw the Persians into a
    battle in which we could defend. For several months, we had
    complete control over the countryside. There was no sign of the
    Persians and the general began to consider setting up some sort
    of government to control the regions we now occupied on this
    eastern side of the "Persian Gates".

    I did not like these lands, they were dry but with few rivers. There
    were some Hellenes in these regions, but fewer than we had seen
    at the city of Sousa. The great man named Alexandros had spread
    this far in his conquests and even further. When I had heard the
    stories of the great Alexandros, I never imagined how far his soldiers
    had to march. He must have truely marched to the ends of the earth.
    I feared we may have to do the same.

    It was near the time of the year when the cold season began to
    approach that we finally found Persians to fight. Two huge armies
    approached us from the south and the west. Antigonos chose a good
    place to defend, where we held the highground, and we waited.

    The army took up position on flat ground, half way up a hill. Because
    of the difficult terrain around the edges of the hill, the Persians were
    forced to approach us from below. The old army had been armed with
    spears, but this new one was trained to fight only with sword. Our
    position on the slopes meant that the swords would have an advantage.



    The first Persian army came up from the south. They marched up
    the hill and spread out to try to flank the line. Antigonos' choice in
    battlefield made this impossible and the Persians were forced to
    attack our center. A small Persian force came up the hill and
    tested our line while the majority waited just below the crest.



    The small force sent to test the line did not take much for the
    infantry to defeat. The infantry from Pontos held their position and
    did not follow the Persians down the hill when they gave up the fight.
    Still the majority of the Persians refused to come all the way up the
    hill. Antigonos decided that it was time to force the Persians to
    move and sent his cavalry down the hill to the southeast.



    When the cavalry attacked, the Persians reorganized their line to
    defend themselves from the horsemen. This was the sign that
    Antigonos was waiting for and he ordered the first line of infanty
    forward. With horsemen running behind them and Pontic infantry
    moving down in front of them, the Persians paniced and charged
    the infantry line to their front. The infantry pushed forward and
    quickly broke their attackers. The Persians paniced again and
    were chased down from the hill.



    When the first army of the Persians began to flee, the second
    army was already near. Antigonos ordered the second line of
    infantry to form a line facing west. We once again waited. As the
    first row of infantry returned from their chase, they took position
    behind the second and rested where they could reinforce if needed.



    Antigonos mounted his horse and lead his companions and the
    Hellenic cavalry down the hill to the south. The two lines of Pontic
    infantry then began to slowly march down the hill to the west. I sat
    on the top of the hill and once again watched my general lead a
    charge into the weakest point of the Persian lines. The Persians
    did not wish to fight after this charge and turned to move from the
    field. Antigonos signalled to the infantry and they came charging
    down the hill and into the Persians with their backs turned.
    Antigonos ordered his cavalry in and watched as his army crushed
    the armies of Persia.



    Captain Damatrios ordered the royal guard down from the command
    post as the battle came to and end. We joined General Antigonos
    at the base of the hill. Around him, the men of the army were already
    looting the dead Persians. These Persians had all been poor and
    carried almost nothing of value. Even their weapons were hadly worth
    the material from which they were made.

    More than half of the second army left the battlefield alive and
    retreated to the south. The dead Persians numbered tens of
    thousands while ours was was just over one thousand. Many of the
    Persians, who had not escaped southward, deserted the army or
    surrendered to our soldiers. From the survivors of this battle, we
    first learned of the problems over succession to the Persian throne.
    Aram had been next in line to be King of Persia, but a man named
    Parkev had been raised to the throne in their western capital. Aram
    had sought to contend this and withdrew his forces to that capital,
    leaving these lands defenseless.

    Just to our south the main capital of the entire Persian Empire was
    within our grasp. Antigonos knew the prestige that would come with
    taking this ledgendary city and could not let such an oppertunity
    pass him up. He gathered the army and gave a great speech to the
    men about the honor we would all soon have. The army was entirely
    behind him and ready for the attack on the city. We began the
    march to the south.



    Even though we had just heard of the problems in the Persian
    Empire, they were already concluded. By the time we reached the
    main Persian capital, the Persians had already chosen their king.
    To our north, the new King of Persia, King Parkev, was marching
    an army toward us that outnumbered us two to one.


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    haha King Parkev? why does the Persian King have an Armenian name?
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    Well the "Persians" are actually Hayasdan. I could have made up a name to make it more Persian, but I'm bad at making up names and just posted what his name actually is.

    Though, it can be roleplayed. He is actually the king of Media and dual monarch with the kings of Parni. When Hayasdan fell, the king of Hayasdan was in Hyrkania and his decendants intermarried with the kings of Media. I can roleplay that that is where some of the Armenian names and such came from...


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    In any case, great AAR! I'm enjoying it much!
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    Great update! Are you also at war with the Pahlava?

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    Man, MAA, I would feel NERVOUS commanding an all-sword-infantry army, and with only your general to provide heavy cavalry. It's not an army that's suited for the East; the only real strength it has is the archer division.
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    Great update MMA - seems like the war for Persia is nearing its grand battle.
    You really must be brave to march to the east with an army of mostly swordsmen and with so little cavalry.
    By the way: what's the situation with the Nomads are they still romang about or has the new "Persian Empire" anaxed them? + are the Indo-greek doing anything against the Persians?
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    Quote Originally Posted by MarcusAureliusAntoninus View Post


    awesome screeny

    and a great chapter too

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    Thanks. I almost didn't add that picture of Antigonos, but I had spent the time to set it up and put it in there anyways.

    I'm working on the next chapter but I've been busy with University lately. "The Battle of Persepolis" is coming up tommorrow or so...


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    The next chapter ended up being somewhat long. I'm going to break it up into a couple pieces and post one a day for the next couple days. This first one is just a short story segment...


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    Forgotten to the Ages

    During our time of conquest in the homelands of the Persians, we
    saw little sign of the enemy assassins, spies, and agents that had
    bothered us so greatly during the years in the lands to the north.
    Mitrozaban had made attempts against Antigonos' life almost
    monthly two years prior but in those times there was no sign of
    him. Because the age of Mitrozaban, Duratios suggested that he
    may have simply died or even retired. Alys feared that the spies in
    Seleukeia may have caught him after we had left the city and
    deprived us of our rightful kill.

    Although we had all worked to find Mitrozaban, Alys had dedicated
    almost all of his time during those years to finding that man. Now
    he had vanished and Alys had felt as if he would never achieve his
    victory. The gods made certain of that fact when Alys died while
    we besieged the Persian capital. Alys had grown quite old and
    gotten sick during that campaign. Once we set up camp around
    the Persian capital he seemed to improve but then died during the
    night, in his sleep.



    For four years, Duratios and I had worked with Alys searching for
    agents and defending our general. During that time, Alys had
    barely spoken of anything but our work. To me he did not feel to
    be a friend or even a comrade, but I felt great respect for the man.
    Even though my father had been a kind and open man, the death
    of Alys reminded me of the day when the men returned to the
    village and told me my father had died in battle. Alys would be
    missed, not simply for his knowledge and skill with the secret arts.

    In less than a month a Hellene, who was trained in Syria for the
    arts of dealing with enemy agents, arrived in the camp. His name
    was Kallistratos, and he was to replace Alys. He was much more
    open and friendlier than Alys but that almost seemed to make him
    weaker. He was older and better trained than Duratios and I, but
    we had experience. Though he was in charge, it was I who
    basically lead all actions against Persian agents.



    As if reborn, the Persians came for us all at once. Their problems
    had passed and they were ready to fight with us once more. First
    we saw signs of Persian agents, then scouts, and finally came the
    army of Persia, lead by their king. The new Persian king, King
    Pakor (Parkev) would personally face General Antigonos on the
    field of battle.
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    The Battle of Persepolis (134BC)

    It was nearly winter once more when we first saw the first signs of
    the Persian army. It was a huge army with soldiers from all over the
    Persian Empire. About a third of the army was cavalry and this
    great number of horses would prove to be a very important factor.
    The new rulers of the Persians, King Pakor, and his son, Vardan,
    were leading the army. They planned to stop us where we stood
    and wipe us out, to the man.

    General Antigonos' understanding of battlefields once again gave
    our army an advantage. The army took up position on the side of
    a mountain with a hillside so steep we thought nobody could climb
    up it in battle. Because of this, Antigonos set up the two lines of
    infantry on either side of the steep slope where the hill was easier
    to climb.

    When the Persians took the field, they slowly moved forward and
    the archers from Hellas let loose their arrows to rain down on them.
    A part of me missed the days when I would rain arrows down on
    the enemies, take cover, and wait for the battle to end. For me,
    things had gotten much more complicated. Those days were a
    lifetime ago even though it had truely only been a three years back.

    The Persians marched through the rain of arrows. At first it seemed
    that their army was dividing into two parts to climb up either side of
    the hill, but then we saw that they would divide into three. While two
    small groups moved up the sides of the hill to attack both flanks,
    most of the Persians began a charge straight up the steep hillside.
    Quickly Antigonos ordered the line to form up at the top of the hill.
    Due to the flankers, we still required a large force to guard the flanks
    and could not form a strong center.



    First the Persian infantry hit the line, both in the center and on the
    flanks. Then the Persian cavalry made its move. The entire mass
    of horses moved to the east and to our right flank. They turned and
    charged forwad. There were thousands of horses charging with a
    great sound. Up the side slope to the east the horde came
    crashing into the line of Hellenes and "Anatolians".



    The men of our army, only armed with swords, could not hold back
    the horses and thousands died. The line began to be pushed back.
    Antigonos ordered the Hellenic cavalry in, but they stopped by
    flanking detachment of Persian horsemen off to the east of the battle.

    The right flank infantry began to worry and the horses pushed right
    through them. All around me the officers and advisors of Antigonos
    began to panic. One Hellene warned that it was time to retreat and
    that the general should be defended. Captain Damatrios ordered the
    royal guard to take up positions around the general. I strung my
    bow, put it to my side, and drew the Hellenic sword from my belt.



    General Antigonos alone had confidence in his eyes. He ordered
    everyone back to where they were and called for his horse. An
    old advisor told him to flee the battle, but he would not even hear
    him speak.

    Once on his horse, Antigonos lead his companions forward. First
    they charged east and broke the battle where the Hellenic cavalry
    was held down. Then, gathering all the horsemen around him, he
    turned back west and toward the battle. There, on that eastern
    hillside, General Antigonos lead a couple thousand Hellenes on
    horse against ten thousand Persian cavalry who were supported
    by several thousand Persians soldiers.



    Encouraged by their general, the Hellenic cavalry fought fiercely
    against the exhausted Persians. The flank of the Persians was
    weakend. Once again, our infantry were pushing back the enemy.
    Even on the western flank, the infantry pushed back the Persians
    and began to work their way around the rear of the Persian line.



    Antigonos ordered his cavalry away from the fight to rest, but once
    again had to confront the Persian cavalry in the open. The two
    great divisions of cavalry charged right at eachother and clashed
    at the base of the steep hill. There, Antigonos found and slew the
    hier to the Persian throne. Prince Vardan fell dead and his men
    scattered.



    When I saw Antigonos leading his cavalry in another charge of the
    Persians on the eastern flank I knew the battle was ours. There in
    the east, King Pakor was surrounded by Antigonos and his horses.
    Separated from his guards, the newly crowned Persian king fell to
    a common soldier from the lands called Pontos.



    With their king and his heir both dead, the Persians were leaderless
    and lost their will to fight. Chased down the hill, the Persians gave
    up the field and Antigonos won another great victory against the
    Persians. However, the cost of the battle was great. More than ten
    thousand in our army were now dead. This one battle had cost the
    Kingdom of the Hellenes almost as much as the entire rest of the
    war combined. The Persians lost about the same number and then
    another ten thousand deserted.



    A few weeks later the garrison from the city combined with the
    reserves from the dead king's army and attacked us again. This
    time we had all of the advantages and the battle went exactly how
    Antigonos had planned it.



    Only a few in our army fell that battle, but more than a third of the
    men who had marched into these lands no longer drew breath.
    Antigonos had drawn the Persians into a great battle and had
    pulled a victory out from it.



    The great cost of the war was beginning to draw on the peoples of
    the region and even on the peoples of both great kingdoms. The
    Persians were finally ready to talk.


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    Steppe battles are very long, but the wars are short.

    Infantry battles aren't as long, but the wars are much longer.

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    Great chapter!

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    I love your screenshots. And your way of writing. (the centered paragraphs.). I thought about copying it but decided against it. Your story/aar is fascinating. Keep it up.

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