This is a story I've been writing for another R:TW forum. In that forum, it was a worthy story and that was how I became one of the famous writer there until I got kicked out (not going to say what I did) and came running here with my tail under my legs. But I have to say that this forums have most the best writers compared to the other one. So maybe it wasn't so bad. Here's the story and I hope it will entertain you guys here!![]()
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Chapter 1: Waiting for the Units
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High above the sky, flew an eagle, spiralling up on the wind as it scanned the ground for some game. With the wind ruffling its feathers, it looked as if it was some grandiose monster flying, but yet it was elegant and smooth, with an aura of power and authority. As it continued to soar, it spotted something moving on the ground. Still, it stayed calm and unmoved. Flying lower, the eagle tipped its body slightly and it started to descend with increasing speed.
Faster and faster it went, the wind screaming and howling around its ears but yet it had no effect on the eagle. With a deadly accuracy, the eagle aimed for the fleeing hare and it made a few alterations now and then, to make sure that it didn’t miss its prey.
Lower, faster.
Lower.
Lower.
Lower.
Lower.
“SNAP!” A brutal sound exploded around the grassland as the eagle’s beak snapped the hare’s neck. Spreading its wing to stabilize itself, the eagle settled on the grassy ground and tightened its grip around the neck. The hare struggled, its paws hitting the head of the eagle feebly and slowly, with a burble of blood bubbling at the back of it’s throat, the last breath escaped from it’s throat. The eagle released its grip on the hare and raised its head up. Shaking its feathers, it waited for its blood to settle down before it started to survey it’s surrounding. Scanning the area for any threat, it spotted a fort a few miles away. However, there seem to be no danger there and the eagle decided to ignore it rather than checked it. With a quick movement, the eagle grasped the hare in its beak and flew into the setting sun.
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Asinius Commodus paced around the open ground in his fort. He was starting to get worried. Although his father had appointed him as the commander of the first army of the Juli family and he was supposed to get his first unit of urban cohort yesterday, however, the there was no sight of them and Asinius dispatched a messenger to Arretium.
“So fair and foul a day I have not seen,” Asinius said, condensation vapours trailed out of his mouth. Pulling his cloak tighter around him, Asinius looked up and sawed an eagle flying directly into the sun. He thought nothing about it as this area was full of eagles, however, his sharp eyes spotted something and upon further observation, he sawed a limped creature in its beak. He continued to stare at the eagle, trying to make out what its prey was but the glaring sun hurt his eyes. Breaking his glance away, he walked to the stables.
Strange, thought Asinius, I had been here for six months and this the first time I’ve seen an eagle carrying its prey. Maybe it is an omen for me. With a heavy shrug of his shoulders, he quickened his pace.
Asinius walked between the stalls of the horses and went up to a huge one at the end of the stables. In there, was a magnificent brown stallion storming its hooves and snorting. Opening the gate, Asinius walked in and stood in front of the red-eye creature. Reaching out his hand, Asinius stroked the horse’s nose and whispered words of comforts to it.
“The day will come soon, when you and I will get out of this godforsaken place,” Asinius whispered. Stroking the horse’s mane, he scanned his eyes to see if any burrs had gotten into the stallion’s mane, but thankfully, there was none and he patted the stallion on its back. “Sleep well, my lad, its getting late,” Asinius said and slowly, he opened the gate and walked out. As he was about to lock the gate, a voice sounded from the entrance.
“Sir, the messenger has return, he bring news from the capital,” a bodyguard told him.
“Bring him here,” Asinius replied. Bowing, the bodyguard walked out and in a few moments, a tall, lean man walked in. His face was slightly red and his eyes seemed to bulge out slightly. Looking closely, Asinius saw the carotid artery in the neck sticking out like an angry welt. It was obvious that the messenger had been running hard.
With a certain air of cautious, the messenger walked slowly and eyed the great stallion warily, trying to keep a considerable distance. He bowed before Asinius and delivered a scroll. Asinius read it before placing it into his tunic belt.
“Beside this news, any other news from my father?” Asinius asked.
“No, sir, the consul is still in Lugdum fighting the Germans,” the messenger replied, his breaths coming in short sharp takes.
“Well, a blow but still something that I can stomach. At least I might prolong my own death,” Asinius said.
The messenger’s brow furrowed in confusion, however, he was in no position to question and he continued with his message.” Accept my deepest apologies, sir, I expressed your wish that you wanted your units most urgently but the diplomats in Arretium said that the units were still under training,”
“Good, you are dismissed then,”
“Thank you, sir, my service is always available to you,” the messenger bowed and walked to his tent.
Asinius watched the messenger before turning his gaze to the sky. The world is never static, thought Asinius, things will change, and one day, I can pass on my leadership to my younger cousin and be finished with this soldiering work. Asinius was different from his kinsmen. Though he followed his one of his older cousin, fighting the war against Spain, Asinius preferred the cultivated mind. He had spent a few years in Athens learning from the Greek philosophers. After the short stint in Spain, he returned to Arretium to learn in the Scipotum before his father pulled him out and placed him in a fort a few distance away from the capital.
Asinius stared at the setting sun, its bloody colour staining the sky, the north winter wind drove in his face and he felt depressed. Someday, he felt that he would come to a bloody end.
Some day.
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