Good poem?:juggle2:
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Good poem?:juggle2:
to be honest...i dont really
i did like your first..but compared to that this one is quite bad
the other was great...this is below average....but thats my opinion
i dont like the fact that you use I so much in the begining without real structure...say I in the beginning of every sentence or one with I and one without I or use it spare
it would do ass a speech...its a good speech but not really a poem...but what do other members think?
Gah, Man-Love.
Im outa here..
It's not man-love...
They are called "love poems"...
think what you will though...
We need to talk :laugh4:Quote:
Originally Posted by Alexanderofmacedon
post the love poems
I'll probably post some later on I haven't written anything in a while. It'll probably be more of a song though.
oh yeah that poem!!
I'll add something distinctly not written by me:
By Thomas Carew, a 17th century (IIRC) poet - converted to use standard modern spellings
Ask me no more where Jove bestows,
When June is past, the fading rose:
For in your beauty's orient deep,
These Flowers as in their causes sleep.
Ask me no more whither do stray
The golden Atoms of the day:
For in pure love heaven did prepare
Those powders to enrich your hair.
Ask me no more whither doth haste
The Nightingale, when May is past:
For in your sweet dividing throat
She winters, and keeps warm her note.
Ask me no more where those stars light,
That downwards fall in dead of night:
For in your eyes they sit, and there,
Fixed, become as in their sphere.
Ask me no more if East or West,
The Phoenix builds her spicy nest:
For unto you at last she flies,
And in your fragrant bosom dies.
ahahhahq i think it is a very funny poem... a bit weird but beautiful 2
hehe this thread is very funny :P
Je vinger die langzaam over mijn borstkast glijdt,
terwijl je op je onderlip bijt,
Je daagt me uit, dat mag ik wel,
hopelijk kom ik niet weer te snel!
~;p
Holy necromancing Batman!Quote:
Originally Posted by The Stranger
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Originally Posted by Caius
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Holy necromancing Batman!Quote:
Originally Posted by Caius
Didn't you notice I am Robin?
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PEVER!!!!!! I DEMAND TO BE REMOVED FROM YOUR SIG, UNLESS YOU SAY SOMETHING NICE, SUCH AS TS IS THE PRETTIEST ON THE .ORG AND HES SOOOO SMART!!!
good poem moros :)
caius, go play outside :P
You asked for it:
thank you, finally i get the creds i deserve... i actually also deserve a badge, for being the prettiest but because it is you, this will do!
If I didn't have exams, I'd go nuts in photoshop. :2thumbsup:Quote:
Originally Posted by The Stranger
ditch the exams... dude you really must learn priorities... this is way more important... its vital, my life-vital.
Lets make one thing clear. Noone over here has a life. Some think they do, but they don't.
i do.Quote:
Originally Posted by Moros
This thread started out okay, over two years ago. However, does it's resurrection serve any other purpose other than to spam? I think not...