Kingdom of Love

[Alexanderofmacedon]

Good poem?

[Leonin Khan]

to be honest...i dont really

i did like your first..but compared to that this one is quite bad

the other was great...this is below average....but thats my opinion

i dont like the fact that you use I so much in the begining without real structure...say I in the beginning of every sentence or one with I and one without I or use it spare

it would do ass a speech...its a good speech but not really a poem...but what do other members think?

[buujin]

Gah, Man-Love.

Im outa here..

[Alexanderofmacedon]

It's not man-love...

They are called "love poems"...

think what you will though...

[Strike For The South]

It's not man-love...

They are called "love poems"...

think what you will though...

We need to talk

[The Stranger]

post the love poems

[Csargo]

I'll probably post some later on I haven't written anything in a while. It'll probably be more of a song though.

[The Spartan (Returns)]

oh yeah that poem!!

[Orb]

I'll add something distinctly not written by me:

By Thomas Carew, a 17th century (IIRC) poet - converted to use standard modern spellings

Ask me no more where Jove bestows,
When June is past, the fading rose:
For in your beauty's orient deep,
These Flowers as in their causes sleep.

Ask me no more whither do stray
The golden Atoms of the day:
For in pure love heaven did prepare
Those powders to enrich your hair.

Ask me no more whither doth haste
The Nightingale, when May is past:
For in your sweet dividing throat
She winters, and keeps warm her note.

Ask me no more where those stars light,
That downwards fall in dead of night:
For in your eyes they sit, and there,
Fixed, become as in their sphere.

Ask me no more if East or West,
The Phoenix builds her spicy nest:
For unto you at last she flies,
And in your fragrant bosom dies.

[The Stranger]

ahahhahq i think it is a very funny poem... a bit weird but beautiful 2

[The Stranger]

hehe this thread is very funny :P

[Moros]

Je vinger die langzaam over mijn borstkast glijdt,
terwijl je op je onderlip bijt,
Je daagt me uit, dat mag ik wel,
hopelijk kom ik niet weer te snel!

[Caius]

hehe this thread is very funny :P

Holy necromancing Batman!

[pevergreen]

Holy necromancing Batman!

Holy necromancing Batman!

Holy necromancing Batman!

Holy necromancing Batman!

[Caius]

Didn't you notice I am Robin?

[The Stranger]

PEVER!!!!!! I DEMAND TO BE REMOVED FROM YOUR SIG, UNLESS YOU SAY SOMETHING NICE, SUCH AS TS IS THE PRETTIEST ON THE .ORG AND HES SOOOO SMART!!!

good poem moros :)

caius, go play outside :P

[Moros]

You asked for it:

[The Stranger]

thank you, finally i get the creds i deserve... i actually also deserve a badge, for being the prettiest but because it is you, this will do!

[Moros]

thank you, finally i get the creds i deserve... i actually also deserve a badge, for being the prettiest but because it is you, this will do!

If I didn't have exams, I'd go nuts in photoshop.

[The Stranger]

ditch the exams... dude you really must learn priorities... this is way more important... its vital, my life-vital.

[Moros]

Lets make one thing clear. Noone over here has a life. Some think they do, but they don't.

[The Stranger]

Lets make one thing clear. Noone over here has a life. Some think they do, but they don't.

i do.

[Hosakawa Tito]

This thread started out okay, over two years ago. However, does it's resurrection serve any other purpose other than to spam? I think not...