Europa Barbarorum Lusotannan Intro.

[fomalhaut]

wow jirisy's, this is very very good. but the text is not it's strongest point, the last bars

"if you dare enter our lands,
the trees and forest will be your murderers.
so be frightened, very frightened"

conveys the guerilla meaning, but sounds very silly almost.

here would be a more poetic and powerful end;

"if you dare march upon our lands,
the very trees of the forest will be your foe
death from nowhere
death from everywhere
be wary, O enemies of Lusotan"

the last sequence of the shots of 5 soldiers with the music was the best part easily.

i think you may be suffering from english being your second language (?), so the impact your words may have are lessened. the meaning is conveyed though, but it lacks a punch.