Re: Contest comments thread.
Hmm, maybe I should have picked 'The Shadow' as the title after all.Originally Posted by Decker
Interesting story Rythmic. The parts with the "()" were you own commentary??Was a little distracting. But other than that. It was an interesting read. Was the guy schizophrenic? That was one of my first thoughts lol. I liked watching him with this "shadowy figure" haunting him on his walk home.
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Some piously affirm: "The truth is such and such. I know! I see!"
And hold that everything depends upon having the “right” religion.
But when one really knows, one has no need of religion. - Mahavyuha Sutra
Freedom necessarily involves risk. - Alan Watts
Re: Contest comments thread.
I actually like the title you have up more than "The Shadow" It's got a more... "epic" short story type air around it like some of the great writers out there.
"No one said it was gonna be easy! If it was, everyone would do it..that's who you know who really wants it."
All us men suffer in equal parts, it's our lot in life, and no man goes without a broken heart or a lost love. Like holding your dog as he takes his last breath and dies in your arms, it's a rite of passage. Unavoidable. And honestly, I can't imagine life without that depth of feeling.-Bierut
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