Am I brilliant?

**The Stranger** · 12-25-2010, 16:18

Originally Posted by Fragony

Why intenional, got no problems of your own, much stronger an emotion to face these. It's is a power a poet should feed on, otherwise it's the not quite so bad latest r&b hit on MTV, made by and for people who don't really like music.

This remains my favorite http://users.fulladsl.be/spb1667/cul.../futility.html

His despair screams in your face. He has seen things

well thats your taste of poetry, there are alot of different kinds. the things that u have read are indeed distant of this reality because they are of another reality. its not that my heart isnt in it. It is a more epic kind of poetry not the down to earth stuff. i think you narrow down poetry to a thing that would exclude many of the worlds greatest poets.

**Fragony** · 12-25-2010, 16:35

Originally Posted by The Stranger

well thats your taste of poetry, there are alot of different kinds. the things that u have read are indeed distant of this reality because they are of another reality. its not that my heart isnt in it. It is a more epic kind of poetry not the down to earth stuff. i think you narrow down poetry to a thing that would exclude many of the worlds greatest poets.

It's true that I want to get something out of it, really understanding someone, understanding what's being said. Not just apreciating style

**The Stranger** · 12-25-2010, 16:50

Originally Posted by Fragony

It's true that I want to get something out of it, really understanding someone, understanding what's being said. Not just apreciating style

well its not so much style. i do have a message only its not a personally related one. and if anything can be said about my poetry it is that it is too heavy on the content and perhaps too little on the style as you already noted when you were talking about rythm.

i think that you like the emotional poetry more than you like the epic poetry in which more a scenery or a "picture" is being described than a situation or a feeling.

however you have made some good points of which i am aware :) but the emotional poetry just doesnt suit me. and i hope that i will succeed in creating my own style without becoming this

otherwise it's the not quite so bad latest r&b hit on MTV, made by and for people who don't really like music.