Well as a fellow who is looking to write an AAR for Medieval : Total War, I would first off say thanks for the great effort! My impression of the first post is something of the following: The GOOD : Great pace, strong images of the "leaders", ALOT of ACTION. I enjoy the quick and dirty details of the encounters. Great job! The BAD : As someone who has only played M2TW and it's mods I'm lost. Give me a map at least so I know where the battles are at. Pictures are good BUT it's hard enough to write interesting text that will hold the attention of readers. Also give me a better sense of time. Has 1 year passed? Five? I don't know really. The UGLY : Please a couple of pictures please! What I said earlier is true BUT get pictures from the Internet to break up the blocks of texts. Even if it is just a scutum or a pair of nobbed sandals
Options or opinions : Please continue with the AAR I find it very good! Your grammar is fine as is the spelling. Something you may want to do (an idea of what I will do with my AAR), take 1 leader each post and flesh them out. I usually do this for the newer Generals until the grandsons come of age. The starting leaders and heirs are usually well entrenched in history or in the minds of those that have played them. By making the others come to life; so to speak, allows your unique view on how the empire is run and is built.
I hope this gives you something that you can use in the futureAnd more importantly, if you would like to do an EB (I beleive I know what that is) then do it. The AAR is for you, we just get to critique it
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