If you are going for the 'god' narrative (being the observer)I would go for " As the silver-haired man addressed the audience, their gazes focused on him" Think John Hurt telling the story with that awesome deep voice.
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If you are going for the 'god' narrative (being the observer)I would go for " As the silver-haired man addressed the audience, their gazes focused on him" Think John Hurt telling the story with that awesome deep voice.
Last edited by Fragony; 03-28-2009 at 08:03.
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