It's okay dude. I like ur story![]()
I luv this AAR! Keep it up man!![]()
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Italians do it better! Chi dice donna dice guai. Abbi donna di te minore, se vuoi essere signore. Donne e buoi dei paesi tuoi. Fiume, grondaia e donna parlatora mandano l'uomo di casa fuora.
And my personal favorite: "Non rimuovere il confine antico fissato dai tuoi padri". In english: "Do not remove the anchent border placed by your fathers". It looses something in the translation......
Great last few updates! I like the way you are setting up the feud within the Carthaginian family, and building a story for all the characters. Great job. :)
"Insipientis est dicere, Non putarvm."
"It is the part of a fool to say, I should not have thought."-Pvblivs Cornelivs Scipio Africanvs
Lives: Pvblivs Cornelivs Scipio (A Romani AAR)
Lives: Alkyoneus Argeades (A Makedonian AAR)
Thank you very much. Im glad your enjoying it.
Much appreciated! Stay tuned for some more drama!
Yes, i wanted to keep suspense within the story by setting up the feud early and letting it build. Also creating a multiple point of view within the aar so that the good guys dont always seem like the good guys and vice versa.
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Many thanks to Hooahguy for this great sig.
Great story so far!
...but...
[picky]isn't it Thalassokratia?[/picky]![]()
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