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    That's mainly because I've really been off and on on this site, I was never really very active on the site until very recently.
    "You must know, then, that there are two methods of fight, the one by law, the other by force: the first method is that of men, the second of beasts; but as the first method is often insufficient, one must have recourse to the second. It is therefore necessary for a prince to know well how to use both the beast and the man.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Owen Glyndwr View Post
    That's mainly because I've really been off and on on this site, I was never really very active on the site until very recently.
    Oh ok. Now i'm ahead of you ha ha ha ha ha. Jk.
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    Hey man, quality over quantity :P
    "You must know, then, that there are two methods of fight, the one by law, the other by force: the first method is that of men, the second of beasts; but as the first method is often insufficient, one must have recourse to the second. It is therefore necessary for a prince to know well how to use both the beast and the man.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Owen Glyndwr View Post
    Hey man, quality over quantity :P
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    Chapter 2: Crisis in Cruddain, Part 4


    Brycham was seated at a table. Across from him sat his wife, Aur. They had been at sea for the last couple days, and, although the sea had been rough, they made their way quite alright, much to Brycham's delight. Despite his excitement, Brycham still could not eliminate the doubt in the back of his mind, "What if I fail?" he found himself asking. No matter how much he tried to reassure himself that the king handpicked him, he was still nervous.

    "But my love," he said to his wife, "If I can't do anything right. I'm young, and uncharismatic, and...poor. Why would I be suited to ruling an entire Kingdom? If anything, I would just end up making matters worse. Oh why King! Why did you have to choose me? And why did I accept?" He said dejectedly.

    His wife smiled; she always found her husband's bouts of self-flagellation entertaining. "Brycham," she said, "you'll be fine. Sure, you are all those things, but on top of that, you are also kind, and compassionate, and wise, and fair. You may lack funds, but you do not lack virtues. The king is no fool, he chose you because he knows you will accomplish his mission."

    Suddenly the door opened. The ship's captain, Carratocoros strode in and walked towards Brycham. "My lord," he said, "land has been spotted. We should make landfall tomorrow morning."

    "That's excellent news," replied Aur, "you may leave us now."

    Carratocoros frowned, clearly irritated by the slight, but he left the room anyways. Aur turned back to her husband, "See love? We're going to arrive at Hibernia tomorrow, you've survived the Cambrian sea, and that was perhaps the most dangerous part of the journey. It's a sign from the gods, it is your destiny to rule these people; the gods will it. Now, get ye to bed. It's a long way from the beach to Emain-Macha, and we need you well rested for when we arrive."

    Brycham agreed, and rose from his chair. He wished his wife a good night, and eased himself into his bed. "The gods will it, eh?" He thought, "well, I suppose we'll see about that."

    The next day was beautiful; the sun was bright and warm, and there wasn't a cloud in the sky as the small group of boats approached the beaches of Eastern Hibernia. As Brycham clumsily made his way to the front of the boat, bumping into several people along the way, he marveled at the incredible organization of the sailors. Everyone knew exactly what it was they were supposed to be doing, and they did it efficiently. Finally the boat hit land, and Brycham watched as the sailors quickly jumped off the boat and started pulling it ashore. When all four of the boats had been drawn up successfully, Carratocoros told Aur and Brycham that they were clear to get off the boats.

    It was an incredible sight, to be sure, the white beach appeared to go on for about 50 meters or so, followed by a small hill. Down the coast, Brycham could see massive, majestic cliffs. "This truly is an incredible land," he thought to himself. After about a half hour, the sailors had finished unloading all the supplies. The group then assembled and prepared to move out. Alongside Brycham and Aur was their personal guard, about fifty Vallorix headed by Cynfawr, a big Cambrian with blonde hair and a long blonde mustache. He was old and experienced, Esrellyn recommended him to Brycham for just that reason. Beside them were Carratocoros and his sailors. At the end of the wagon were 2 horse carts which carried the group’s supplies.

    The group walked for about a half hour, when Carratocoros stopped the group. "This is where we part ways," he said to Brycham, "This is where we part ways. I shall return to Cambria and inform Esrellyn that you made it safely to Hibernia." Brycham thanked the man and the group continued on.

    They walked all day, and when night came, they settled down and made camp. The group scoured the countryside, and food was in good supply to everyone. Once they finished eating, the group settled down to sleep. The group woke up early the next morning, packed their tents into the wagons, and continued on their way.

    They continue on the worn road, little more than wheel grooves, and presently they group came to a passage in the road overgrown with bushes and tall grass. As the procession passed through this section they could hear a rustling off to the side of the road. Cynfawr looked to Brycham, and Brycham nodded. Cynfawr motioned to three of his guards, who drew their swords and headed towards the thicket from where the rustling came. After about a minute Brycham saw two young men, boys more likely, running away from the thicket, moving quickly to the North. Behind them he could see his guards trailing them. The procession was idle for a half-hour, waiting for his guards to return. Eventually the guards returned, empty handed, "They were too fast for us sir.," one of the guards sputtered, exhausted by the run.

    "Well, it's your call Brycham," Cynfawr said, "What should we do now?"

    Brycham made his way to one of the carts, and stood on it. From his vantage point, he addressed his group: "Well my friends. The Hibernians know we're here now. We all know these men do not like us, and they will do whatever it takes to ensure that our stay here is as short as possible." Brycham paused. He saw as some of his men shifted nervously from foot to foot. He knew that no one wanted to die here, in an unfamiliar land, so far away from their friends and family. "However," he continued, "That does not mean that we should engage at first sight. We are peacekeepers, not conquerors. So therefore I say to you, be prepared for the worst, but hope for the best. The less threatening we appear to them, the less likely it is for them to attack us. Listen to me, and we...should...get out of this alright. Thank you." Brycham got down and walked to his wife. "Well, they know we're here," he said.

    "Yes, but I think you and I both knew this would happen," she replied. "We'll be fine, let's get moving shall we?"

    Brycham nodded, and motioned once again to Cynfawr. "Move out!" Cynfawr barked, and the procession continued. It was another two hours before the procession at last could make out the silhouette of the city's massive walls. As they group continued to make their way towards the city, they started to notice that there was what appeared to be another, smaller wall in front of the city.

    The group closed in on the walls, and Brycham noticed that the small wall in front of the city wasn't a wall at all, but an army, prepared for war. Many were in full armor, swords drawn, and spears pointed towards the procession, the city's spies had done their job flawlessly, and now the citizens of Emain-Macha were ready for a fight. Brycham could hear his men whispering behind him. Cynfawr brought his hand down to his sword, and began to draw it. Brycham put his hand on Cynfawr's. "No, let me talk to them." He told his men to stand their ground, and then walked out towards the group, Cynfawr by his side. Before them, Brycham saw a man in the center of the mass sheath his sword, he was obviously the leader of the army.

    Brycham approached the crowd and, after a minute, addressed the crowd: "Who are you people, and what is the meaning of this?"

    "We should be asking you the same question. Who are you?," responded the leader in an aggressive tone.

    “My name is Brycham dy’Aran of the House of Calandoros and, by the power vested in me by High King Massorias of Casseia, I am now King of this city. And as your King, I demand that you all lower your weapons and let me enter my city.”

    The man opposing Brycham’s eyes narrowed, irritated by the haughtiness of Brycham. “Your words have no sway here. Our city does not need a King, especially not one appointed by a Casseian swine. We Hibernians are subject to no one, and, if your fool of a King wants to dispute that, he can come here himself and wrest this city from our cold, dead hands!” The crowd of Hibernians roared, showing their approval for their spokesperson. “Now,” the man continued, “I am going to ask the whole lot of you to leave, as outsiders are not permitted within the city walls.”

    “This is ridiculous!” Brycham replied, “You cannot tell us what to do. Come on men!” He shouted, gesturing to his troops, “we’re going inside.” The caravan began to move, but the Hibernians quickly produced their blades and took fighting stances, the city walls shut tightly behind them.

    “As I said,” the man replied in a disdainful manner, “The city is closed to outsiders, and if you try to enter, we will prevent your entry by force.”

    Brycham grimaced, “very well,” he growled, “we shall not enter your city.” The man smiled. “Men!” Brycham yelled, “We shall camp outside of the city walls, over there.” He said, gesturing towards a patch of flat land several hundred meters from the city walls.

    The man frowned, “What is the meaning of this?” he asked, incredulously. “I told you not to…”

    “Enter the city?” Brycham interrupted, “why, that’s exactly what I’m doing. I figure, that since I cannot enter my city, that I might as well be as close to it as I can. As Brycham made his way back to his group, he reveled in his victory as he heard the other man yelling loudly and stomping his foot on the ground in anger.

    Brycham entered into the crowd of Casseians waiting eagerly for him to return. “Hail to the conquering hero!” He heard one cry. “You beat that Hibernian raw! At this rate we’ll have that town in no time!” cried another.

    “Alright, alright,” Cynfawr finally interrupted. “Stop your yapping and start setting up camp, I want a good perimeter established before dusk men! Step to it!” Thanks to Cynfawr’s yelling, the men finally settled down and began moving towards their camp site, but not before they all took their final chance to congratulate their leader on a battle deservedly won.

    As the last man stalked away, Brycham turned to himself. “Aye, the first victory falls to me, but indeed it shall be the first of many, for these Hibernians are a resilient bunch, much easier for they to bend words than to bend their knees. This conflict will be much harder than I thought.”

    Several hours later Brycham was making his way through camp. The sun was just setting behind the hills and Brycham was tired, more tired than he could ever remember being; his head was drooped over, with his feet dragging slowly behind him. He ignored the smell of roasting meat from the nearby campfire and proceeded directly to his tent, too hungry both to eat and to be bothered to socialize with his men.

    He ripped the flap of his tent and fell onto the firs that made up his bed; he was asleep in minutes.



    ***


    The young man slipped past the preliminary tents of the Casseian Camp. “Easy,” he thought to himself, “they’ll be so busy feasting and reveling in their ‘victory’, that they won’t even notice I’m here.” He quickly moved through the camp, making sure to steer clear of the campfire on the eastern side of camp. Finally he closed in on his objective, the main tent. He slowly pulled back the flap and entered the tent. It was dark inside, but the man could see that it was empty; no one there save himself and his target. “Prefect, he’s asleep, this’ll be easy!” he thought. He produced a dagger from his dark cloak and, raising it aloft, stood at the foot of his target. He smiled before striking at his target.


    ***

    Brycham had been having the most wonderful dream. He was dreaming that he was back at sea, the ship was rocking gently back and forth as he held his wife close, looking back to his beloved Cambria. Suddenly storm clouds accumulated around the boat and a storm ensued. The boat rocked furiously, and he struggled to hold his place, all the while trying desperately to keep Aur by his side. The boat continued to rock, and then a great wave hit the boat. Brycham watched in horror as several of the hands were hurled off the boat, and then, tragedy struck. His wife lost her footing and was flung to the deck of the boat. Brycham tried to hold onto his wife, but a great wave came and swept her away, Brycham felt warm tears roll down his eyes as his wife was swept into the sea. He got back to his feet and began bounding towards the edge of the deck. He was heading towards the sea when suddenly one final great wave formed before him. It must have been at least 30 feet high, and beneath that black water, nothing survived. Brycham’s mouth was agape as the massive wave crashed into Brycham.

    The shock of the wave snapped Brycham from his dream. He woke up with a start. As his eyes began to focus, he saw the outline of a person standing before him. He watched as whoever it was before him reached into his clothing and pulled something out. He saw the form raise the object above his head and begin to launch it at Brycham. Brycham noticed the object flash briefly and then realized that the object was a dagger! He reached his arms out and grabbed the assailant’s wrists, stopping the man dead in his tracks. Brycham lifted his legs and kicked the man hard in the stomach. The man reeled in pain and fell over into the side of the tent.

    Taking advantage of the few moments to himself, Brycham remembered the dagger Caratadoc had given him. He pulled it out from under his pillow and moved to where the assailant was knocked over. By the time he got over there, the assailant had re-composed himself, and was standing waiting for Brycham. As Brycham approached, the assailant took the initiative, and tried to strike at Brycham with his dagger. Brycham dodged the attack, and lowered his foot and tripped the man. Acting quickly, Brycham got on top of the man and lowered his dagger at the assailant’s throat.

    Now, for the first time, Brycham got a good look at his assailant. The attacker was no man, but a boy! His face was soft, and his eyes innocent. He looked like a boy who may not have even shaved his chin, let alone even thought about killing a man. Brycham began to find conflict within. “He tried to kill me, I must end his life, I will appear weak if I do not. However, he is but a boy, I cannot deprive a person of a life he has not even begun to experience. He lowered his dagger, and rolled off the man. “Well, go on, get out of here!” He yelled at the boy. The boy got up and ran directly out of the tent.

    A couple minutes later Cynfawr, Aur, and a few other guards came bursting into his tent. “My lord!” Cynfawr shouted, “We heard what sounded like a scuffle, what happened.”

    “I was attacked, a young boy tried to kill me, however I managed to fight him off, I’m fine now, thank you.”

    “How could this happen?” Exclaimed Cynfawr, incredulously, “I bet it was that lazy excuse for a soldier Adde asleep at the post again. I’ll give him such a beating that he’ll never even be able to close his eyes again!” He shouted as he stalked out of the tent, but not before ordering his guards to remain with Brycham.

    “Oh you’re hurt!” Cooed Aur, pointing to a cut in Brycham’s forearm, “here, let me patch that up for you.”

    “Thank you Aur.”

    Aur patched up his arm, and the two slipped into bed. Sleep at last welcomed Brycham to sleep with open arms.

    [CENTER]***[/CENTER

    Brycham woke up bright and early the next morning to a very grumpy stomach, so he immediately made his way to the campfire to see what he could do about breakfast. Slowly, more of his men began to come towards the campfire with the same intent. Soon the men were all around, most praising Brycham for his bravery and stoicism of the previous night. Spirits were at a high, and many soon became even more confident that the city would be theirs shortly.

    Brycham, however, was disturbed. It was not because of the resistance he had experienced in getting to the city, that wasn’t entirely unexpected, however he was more perturbed by the recent attempt on his life. “What did it mean?” He asked himself, “Who was it from?”

    “Why it was from those damned Hibernians, of course!” His mind responded.

    “Indeed, then it means that they are adamant about our staying here. What on Earth am I going to do? Their minds seem as one, they offer a concentrated force which I cannot match, I will need to think about this, they have to be weak somewhere…”

    Brycham’s reflection was cut off by the approach of several men: two guards and a young man. Brycham stood up to greet the guards.

    “Sire, we found this one trying to, er, sneak into camp. What should we do with him?” Asked one of the guards.

    Brycham looked into the captives face. Those brown eyes, that young face, he knew that face. It was the assassin from the previous night. The guards threw the boy to his knees.

    “I say we kill him,” said one of the guards at the campfire, “the only good Hibernian is one that’s dead.”

    “Please don’t kill me!” pleaded the boy rapidly, “At least not until I’ve told my story. Once that has happened, then you may do with me as you please.”

    Brycham frowned, but sat down all the same. “Very well,” Brycham said, “tell your story.”

    The boy remained kneeling, and then he started his story. It started slow, with quivering voice, he started quietly, but picked up in force and intensity as his story drew on.

    “My…name is Eddoros dy’Emos, Patriarch of the Deirris family of Emain-Macha. My family was once great, one of the three Great Families in the city, and we had many families who served us. Once upon a time, most would think twice before crossing us, however that all changed when the Druids were killed. With the destruction of the Druids, the architect of the action, a young man named Duratios took power of the Comulae, another of the major families in our town. He quickly used his newfound popularity and strength to strong arm many of the lesser families of the city into pledging allegiance to him. With his newfound vassals, the Comulae quickly had enough power to renew their feud with we, the Deirris, which the Druid’s had prevented a week before their deaths. Our family could not match the strength of the Comulae, and, although our warriors fought bravely, we were losing. Soon, our vassal families saw that we could no longer offer them protection, and so split off and joined the Comulae. Meanwhile, our warriors continued to die. Soon, I was one of the last remaining men of the family, and thusly, at the age of 15 I was named the patriarch of the family. Realizing that this feud could not continue, I, Eddoros decided to pledge the allegiance of my family to the Comulae. Things finally seemed to be settling back to normal, and the Deirris appeared to finally be able to recover in peace. That is, until you and your men showed up. Duratios was enraged by your gestures before the city gates. He considered an affront to his power, and so, he ordered me to prove my family’s worth, and end your life.

    Why did you not end my life, most powerful Casseian, for the pain I suffered from the shame of returning to Duratios in failure was far greater than any wound you could have inflicted upon me. For my weakness, Duratios banished both me and my family from the city, forever. So now, I come here, I am at your mercy, mighty Casseian, for I have nowhere else to go. Kill me if you it is what you desire, Casseian, the gods know I deserve it, but I humbly beg you, spare my family. Take them as your vassals if you must, anything to ensure their survival, they mean everything to me.

    There was nary a dry eye round the campfire as Eddoros ended his story, so deeply were the men touched by this young man’s bravery and devotion; it mattered not to them if he almost killed their lord. Brycham remained, silent, stone faced. Finally he spoke: “Before any decision can be made, I have some questions for you.”

    “I shall try my best to answer them truthfully, Casseian,” responded Eddoros.

    “Firstly, you said that you were one of the three great families in the city. I’m assuming that the Comulae are the second, but who is the third?”

    “That would be the Emain. They are the oldest family in the town, some even assert that they were the founders of the city. Their power is great, great enough o keep the Comulae in check, at least for now, but I believe that it will not be long ere the two begin fighting for total control.”

    “Interesting,” responded Brycham. “Now, secondly, I noticed that a large body of men were behind Duratios when we arrived at the city. Is he popular among the people?”

    “Hmm…I think that at one point, yes, he was very popular among the people. However, after these past few weeks, I think that his following is based more on fear than by adoration.”

    “So then, if he did not appear quite as powerful, then you don’t believe that so many would be so apt to follow him?”

    “No, indeed not.”

    Brycham smiled. “Rise, proud Eddoros, I shall not kill you. Neigh, I offer both you and your family the full protection of the Casseian Empire. The Deirris family shall stay in camp with us, and, when I succeed in becoming King of this place, you, Eddoros, shall be well rewarded.”

    Eddoros bowed before his new master. “Thank you my lord, you shall not regret your decision, I guarantee it. Now, if you’ll excuse me, I need to give my family the good news.”

    “No so fast,” Brycham said warmly, “there is something I need you to do first.”


    ***


    The gates of Emain-Macha open as Eddoros strides in. He does not care about the crowds of people now turning to look at them. He hears some whispering to one another, and he knows that soon Duratios will know that he has entered the city. However, he doesn’t care, for he knows that as soon as this one job is finished, his family will be safe, and, come what may, he has the protection of the Casseian Empire standing beside him.

    Eddoros approaches the center of town, soon a huge crowd of people has begun to gather around him. He finds a box, places it on the ground, and then climbs on top of it. The crowd settles as Eddoros looks upon the people of Emain-Macha. “My fellow Hibernians!” He shouted, trying his best to project to the crowd, “as you surely already know, my name is-”

    “Eddoros,” came a voice from the back of the crowd; it was Duratios, “I thought we banished you last night. Guards, escort this man out of town, and this time, make sure he stays out, permanently.”

    Eddoros felt the trickle of sweat fall down the side of his face. He gulped loudly and then tried to continue his address with two burly guards pushing his way through the crowd towards him. “You see, er, I was banished, tha- that is true, but you see I have a new lord now, and he has an important message that he wanted me to give to you fine citizens.” Finally the guards reached him, and were beginning to lift him up when another voice interrupted their work.

    “Stop,” the voice ordered. The crowd turned to see a grown man, perhaps in his thirties with dark hair, and striking blue eyes. He was a tall man, and his stature alone would have been enough to frighten even the most experienced soldiers. The look on his face was that of a soldier, and the fact that his face and limbs were unblemished stood only as a testament to his military skill. His name was Ivomagos, and he was Duratios’s chief rival, the patriarch of the Emain clan.

    “And just why should I stop Ivomagos?” sneered Duratios.” This man was banished from the town, all know it, he should never have returned, and for breaking this command, he should die.”

    “I think the more important question should be why you are so apt to end this man’s life, Duratios,” retorted his rival, now turning towards the crowd. “This man has done nothing wrong. If he came only to deliver a message, where is the harm in that? I say we let him speak!” The crowd yelled in agreement.

    Duratios, knowing that he was beaten, ordered his guards to stand down. The guards reluctantly did as they were told; lowering Eddoros and then returning to their lord.

    “Now,” continued Ivomagos, “what is this message you have for us Eddoros?”

    Eddoros glanced around, and then, deciding it was safe, continued to speak, exactly as his lord had instructed him to: “His lord Brycham says that he does not wish to be your enemy. He was sent by the High King merely to help administer justice to the area. Since he is unable to conduct business within the city, he will do it from without. He wants to let you all know that if there is a dispute within town, he will be happy to mediate the affair if you bring the case to his tent in the Casseian camp.”

    Brycham sat on a chair in his tent, impatiently waiting for Eddoros to return from the town. He was simultaneously pleased and relieved when he saw the tent flap pulled back and Eddoros enter in one piece. “I assume everything went as planned?” asked Brycham.

    “Aye my lord,” responded Eddoros, “I gave the message just like you asked, although I don’t understand why you needed me to risk my neck to deliver such a message.”

    Brycham smiled. “It’s simple my friend. Duratios controls the city through fear. No one will overthrow him because he is too powerful, and there is no one to contest him. By offering to hear cases, I am doing several things. Firstly, I am showing the people that I am not their enemy, I am instead their friend. Secondly, I am dividing the city. By doing this, I am showing the people that there is someone who can contest their lord. They will begin to doubt Duratios, and soon he will lose support. “All we need to do now is wait,” said Brycham easily as he leaned back in his chair.


    ***


    Several days pass after Eddoros’s announcement to the Hibernians, and yet nothing happens. The men began to get restless, Brycham could hear the things they were saying. They thought him a coward, a fool. They began to wonder why they were even there in the first place. However, Brycham was resolute. He believed in his plan. Every day he set up his chair in his tent and waited.

    “Sir,” said Cynfawr on one of these days, “I think that we should rethink our plan.”

    “And why is that?” inquired Brycham.

    “Because, sir, this one is obviously not working. The men are getting restless, I’m beginning to fear a mutiny.”

    “Nonsense, this plan will work. It’s just going to take a little more time. The idea of a second choice in their minds will eventually lead them to become dissatisfied.”

    “But my lord, this is ridiculous. We’re soldiers, we don’t wait.”

    But Brycham did not respond, for standing before them was a very old woman. She was small, even more so because she was hunched over, a cane in her right hand.

    “Oh noble Casseian!” she said in a quiet voice. “My name is Edda, and I have come to your protection, seeking justice. I have been wronged, and unjustly served by Duratios. Therefore, I come here in hope of a fair decision.”

    “See Cynfawr?” asked Brycham playfully, “things are looking better already. “Edda, your pleased will not go unheeded. Why don’t you continue and tell me your problem, and I will do my best to serve justice fairly.”

    Brycham heard and came to a decision on the case rapidly and, although not both sides were joyous about the agreement, they all agreed that it was just. After this day, more people began taking their issues to Brycham, first at a trickle, then to a full stream. Most of the cases came from the lower rungs, and all of the people coming were from the Emain family, however this did not dissatisfy Brycham, for it meant that his plan was working; people were beginning to trust him.

    One night, after a long day of hearing the woes of the people, Brycham lay in bed beside his wife. He was having trouble getting to sleep that night, and so occupied his time by shifting back and forth. Finally he could take it no more and got out of bed. He pulled back his flap to see an orange glow coming from the city. He began walking forward to investigate when a young lady ran by him. Brycham pulled him aside, “What is the matter good miss?” he asked.

    “It’s a fire!” the woman cried hysterically, “The Emain household is on fire, we have to get out of here!” The man could take no more, and immediately began running off. Quickly Brycham ran towards Cynfawr. He shook him awake and then ordered him to rouse the men and fetch buckets of water to bring in the city before running off towards Emain-Macha.

    When he arrived at the town gates before him was standing several guards standing before him. “You’re not allowed in here, turn back!” They ordered. But Brycham did not turn back, instead he right through them towards the fire in his city.

    As Brycham approached the fire, he quickly realized that it was much worse than he had expected; the entire house was engulfed in flame, with a large plume of smoke above. Hibernians were all around trying desperately to put the fire out, but Brycham could see it would be of little use. Suddenly beside him he noticed a young woman beside him. She was in tears, all the while screaming to the Hibernians, “My baby, my baby. My beautiful baby boy is still trapped in the house, someone must save him, quickly!”

    Brycham wasted no time as he burst through the doors of the house. He could faintly hear the sound of screaming, but he didn’t know from where. He quickly ran from room to room desperately trying to find the child, all the while his insides were screaming at him. His nose mouth and eyes were choked with smoke, and he felt as though he were about to collapse, but he continued on. He went upstairs, and the screaming got louder. Then before him he saw the child, it was a miracle itself that he was still alive. Brycham scooped the child up and rushed downstairs and outside just as a burning beam collapsed, blocking access to the house once and for all. Brycham returned the child to its grateful mother before collapsing. He took some time to collect his breath, and then went on the help direct the actions of his men.

    By this time, the efforts of the men were no longer about putting out the fire itself, but about preventing it from spreading to the entire city. After several hours of work the fire destroying the Emain’s centuries old house had finally died down, the fire was contained and the city was saved.

    After the men were sure that the fire was contained, everyone gathered around Ivomagos, who was about to address the assembly. “My cousins”, he said, “thanks to all of your brave efforts, the fire has been contained!” The men cheered loudly, until Ivomagos raised his hand to silence them. He continued, “It is indeed unfortunate that the house has been destroyed, however I guarantee you that it shall be rebuilt. It’ll take more than a small fire to destroy this family! It is my belief that this fire was no accident. Indeed, I believe that it was the work of Duratios. We all have long known that he has wanted to end our family and take power for himself, and his absence here only further implicates him. My cousins, I guarantee you all, that this deed will not go unpunished!”

    “Now, I think there is someone who we should praise. Brycham dy’Aran,” he shouted, “Come up here, my wife would like to thank you.” Brycham was surprised, but he walked forward nonetheless. Before him he saw the very same woman who was so hysterical before, the woman whose child she saved.

    “Thank you,” she said, babe clutched tightly in her arm, “without you, our little Verica would probably have died, that was very heroic.”

    “Today, we have all learned something from this Casseian,” said Ivomagos. “This night we have seen a truly selfless act. This man risked his own life for a woman he knew not, for a people not his own. He has shown bravery, compassion, and an ability to lead that few possess, and for that, I have decided to throw my lot in with him.” Brycham was astounded as he watched the man kneel before him, and then watched as the whole crowd did the same. “Brycham the Casseian, I place myself at your mercy, from this point I shall serve none but you; I implore you to accept my offer.”

    “I shall indeed,” replied Brycham, “I vow to ensure that you and your family are forever safe and secure, and that no harm shall befall you whilst I you are in my service.” The men rose and cheered their new lord. Brycham smiled, things were coming together nicely.

    The next few months saw more and more successes on the part of the Casseians. The very next day all 8 protectorates of the Emain attached themselves to the Casseians. Then, the families of the Comulae began leaving Duratios, and placing themselves under Brycham. The Herenti came first, followed by the Opulae and the Trigontae a couple weeks later. As autumn turned to winter, the Dolonae, Magulos and Arnae pledged themselves to the Casseians. Soon the Comulae found themselves entirely without vassals; they were all alone.

    One winter day, the remnants of the Comulae left the town and approached the camp of Brycham. “Casseian, come out!” he roared. Brycham came out.
    “What do you want?” inquired Brycham.

    “I challenge you to a duel! The winner will control all of Emain. What say you?”

    Brycham thought awhile, but finally accepted Duratios’s challenge. “My lord, you’ve already won, you don’t need to do this!” urged Cynfawr.

    “I’m sorry Cynfawr, but I cannot appear weak, and I want to have unanimous support within the area. I cannot rule the land if there are dissenters.” Duratios smiled as Brycham removed his armor and drew his sword. Duratios did the same. The Hibernians formed a circle around the two, and the duel began.

    Duratios took the initiative and quickly struck at Brycham with a large sweep towards Brycham’s head. Brycham deftly deflect the blow, but did not retaliate. Duratios followed up with several more attacks, but Brycham blocked them all; his military training with the Druids served him well. Finally Duratios began to become infuriated, he started attacking more rapidly and flamboyantly, but Brycham blocked everything. Without even having to strike a blow, Brycham had Duratios on his knees. “Alright, you win,” said Duratios, “get it over with and kill me.”

    Brycham raised his sword to end the man’s life when Massorias’s advice echoed in his head. “You must never resort to violence as the aggressor. If you do this they will harden their hearts towards you, and you will never be successful.” He lowered his sword. He realized the dilemma he was in. If he didn’t kill the man, he would lose the respect of the tribes already pledged to him, however, if he killed them, his aggression would start a blood feud, and perhaps lose him support anyways. “I will not kill you Duratios,” he said after pondering for a while. “The honor is Ivomagos. I shall leave the decision of what to do with the Comulae to him.” Ivomagos thanked his new lord as the Comulae were taken away by the Emain, Duratios was crying.


    ***


    Spring had come to the hill of Tara. The winter snow had melted away, and was replaced by green grass and colorful flowers. Birds chirped, and the nearby streams ran. “What a great day for a coronation.” Brycham said to his wife standing beside him, arms interlinked.

    “Indeed,” Aur replied, “it is a day which shall be remembered throughout the ages.” Brycham smiled, and together they began to ascend the ancient hill, Hibernians all round were cheering for their soon to be King. Presently the couple ascended the hill, beside them were the heads of several families. Some, such as Ivomagos beamed at their new king, others, such as Duratios were emotionless. It had been a long time since there had been a king who had actually managed to unify the whole country, and thus earn the honor of being crowned upon that holy hill, but Brycham had managed to do it. After the Comulae were graciously spared eradication by Ivomagos, word quickly spread of Brycham’s wise and just hand, as well as his kind gestures towards the Hibernians. Soon, kings were coming from as far away as Ictis to pledge their support to this Casseian. Now the crowd became silent as Trwtian, the last living drwdae of Tara bid the man to kneel. Brycham got on one knee as Trwtian placed a crown upon Brycham’s head. “Rise, Brycham the Casseian, High King of Hibernia.” And Brycham rose as all the Hibernians bowed, for just the second time to a Casseian. Hibernia at last was pacified.
    "You must know, then, that there are two methods of fight, the one by law, the other by force: the first method is that of men, the second of beasts; but as the first method is often insufficient, one must have recourse to the second. It is therefore necessary for a prince to know well how to use both the beast and the man.
    -Niccolo Machiavelli


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    Gah! I have at last finished that chapter. This section was 13 pages according to Microsoft Word. I promise for the next chapter to make my updates a wee bit shorter. And I promise there shall be a bit more action in it as well.

    Well, anyways, hope you like the update. While I did find it hard to write, I am pleased with it :)

    Well, off to play MTW now, see y'all later!
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    "You must know, then, that there are two methods of fight, the one by law, the other by force: the first method is that of men, the second of beasts; but as the first method is often insufficient, one must have recourse to the second. It is therefore necessary for a prince to know well how to use both the beast and the man.
    -Niccolo Machiavelli


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    Dude, are you going to publish this or something? haha. Good stuff!
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    All righty, outline is done! It doesn't look too long, so I should (hopefully) have the update done by Wednesday

    Also, I added a little table of contents to my first post, so check it out!
    "You must know, then, that there are two methods of fight, the one by law, the other by force: the first method is that of men, the second of beasts; but as the first method is often insufficient, one must have recourse to the second. It is therefore necessary for a prince to know well how to use both the beast and the man.
    -Niccolo Machiavelli


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    Chapter 3: The Conflict Begins, Part 3

    Adnu was seated in his tent, reminiscing on what had transpired during the several weeks since the army had arrived at the walls of Bratosporios. What a horrible few weeks it had been. Everyday he was called to the field, where he, along with his compatriots would take up ladders, and try to take the walls of the city. In the evening, after yet another failed attack, the rams would pound at the wall, in hoped of somehow breaching the tall city gates.

    Even now he could still remember the first man he killed. It happened on the second day of the siege. He was to be the first up the ladder that day, and he was nervous. He took up the ladder with his men, and they ran out. They made it to the walls in no time and quickly hoisted the ladder up. Adnu then took up his sword and shield and began climbing the ladder. As he was coming up to the top of the ladder a man stepped up and impeded his path. Without thinking twice, Adnu plunged his spear straight into the man. He fell back with a thud. Adnu reached the top of the ladder and hopped onto the walls. Now he was able to get a closer look at the man he had killed. It was no man, it was a boy! Adnu felt faint, he couldn't believe that he had just killed someone, his family; his wife was left with no one. He felt about to fall over when Esdyn grabbed his shoulder, and helped him maintain his balance. It was none too soon, as a contingent of Aedui approached them. Adnu fought hard, and claimed the lives of several more warriors before the Generals finally recalled the men; the attack was yet again futile.

    Adnu shuddered as he relived that terrible day. He remembered several days later hearing the laughter of those three boys: Afin, Brigo, and Tesna delightfully reliving the previous day’s action, bragging about the men they had felled. Adnu couldn't understand it, how could anyone be so delighted to end another man's life, it just didn't make any sense. It infuriated him, "how can they be so damn jovial about something like this? God, I hate war." He said aloud to himself. Suddenly he was consumed with the desire to leave. "Why couldn't I?" he thought, "no one would know, I could be gone in an instant, and then I'd never have to kill another man so long as I live."

    "No, if I did that, then I would never see my family again, I will have to do this, for my family, I must end another's life; I must persevere so I can go home."

    Adnu's thought were broken by the entrance of Esdyn, adorned in full armor, his blade placed in the scabbard strapped to his hip. "Come on friend, it's time. Last night they splintered the wood on the door, it is about to fall. They want everyone to file up outside. The city falls today!" He spoke with such pride, such determination. Adnu suddenly felt ashamed to think of deserting, abandoning the friend he pledged to help those two years ago.

    Esdyn noticed the change in Adnu's expression. "What's the matter?" he inquired. Adnu told him about the conflict raging in his mind just previous to his entrance. Esdyn smiled, "I know that feeling, friend. I had the same when I killed my first man, it's something every soldier experiences, and must get over. To kill a fellow human being is no simple act, but I'm sure you'll get over it soon enough. Now come on, gather your equipment, we have to move."

    Ten minutes later Adnu was out of his tent and forming up with his division. It was a beautiful day; everything was green, and all vestiges of winter were gone from the Earth. The sun was low in the sky and it was cool, but the cloudless sky suggested to Adnu that the day was going to warm up rather quickly. "Nice day for a victory." said Esdyn nonchalantly. He was better dressed than most, being the only professional soldier in the army. He had a suit of chain mail, with an iron helmet upon his head. He carried a large shield, richly adorned with patterns and insignias. In his right hand he held his long sword.



    Finally the division formed up. Being the farmers that they were, most of the soldiers were very plainly dressed, with long pants, and their chests decorated with intricate designs. Their equipment was even simpler; a light spear of wood with a bronze, or sometimes iron spearhead, and a wooden shield.



    On the far right of the division, standing beside Esdyn was the banner carrier, and he looked almost identical to the regulars of the division, only instead of a spear, he held a long pole, which contained at its top, the symbol of the division; a blue wolf.

    Area from which Esdyn's division is derived

    By the time the division had finally formed up, the ram crew had finished their work, and succeeded in battering down the gate. From thence, they withdrew and delivered the good news to the joint generals, Einion and Aron, both standing beside each other in separate chariots.

    "Delightful!" Einion remarked, "now we can truly show those Aedui that we mean business."

    "Yes indeed," responded the younger Aron, "but who shall we send."

    "Hmm, I judge that the forces remaining in the city are weak, let us send in Esdyn's division as the main force."

    "But Einion, that's just a bunch of levies, some haven't even tasted blood yet, you can't possibly expect them to take the brunt of the Aeduic attack can you?"

    "Even Lugoae need time to earn their spurs, but you are right, send one division of Cwmyr, the Rycalawre, the Cambrian Taceitos, and the Drwdae as support."

    "Yes my lord," responded one of the messengers, and quickly the orders were dispatched throughout the army."

    Esdyn received the orders from the joint-generals and turned to his men. "Alright men, our time has come. We have been given the lead in the attack, what think you; shall we take some Aeduic skulls today?" The crowd roared in approval, and Esdyn ordered his men forward.

    ***

    Berdic, meanwhile was sitting on his horse, dressed in full battle regalia at the top of the hill on which the city resided. Beside him sat his son, likewise in battle dress. Behind them was their bodyguard; a division of heavy cavalry, the best troops in the city. After observing the Casseian army forming up, Berdic turned to the captain of his bodyguards. "I perceive that the Casseian army numbers in the several thousands, what is the current condition of our forces?"

    "All told, about 350 soldiers, sir."

    At this moment Berdic noticed that several divisions were moving out towards the now destroyed gates. "The gates are providing us with an untenable position. We simply don't have the man power to hold them there. Withdraw all forces to the square immediately."

    "Yes sir," responded the captain. He nodded to one of his men, who raised a green flag. Behind them, the blast of a horn could be heard, the men positioned at the gates began to draw off.

    "Why would you do this father?" Cador asked incredulously.

    "It was necessary, we could never hold at those gates, we'd be overrun. Also, I would appreciate it if you didn't undermine my authority."

    "But by withdrawing the troops, you are subjecting our people to pillaging and destruction at their hands. All those citizens, cowering in their homes were expecting you to hold the walls!"
    "That's enough!" He yelled. He composed himself and continued, "what's done is done, the dye has been cast, there's no turning back now."

    Cador opened his mouth to respond, but shut them quickly when Berdic cast him a sharp glare.

    ***

    Esdyn's division was beginning to move at a steady pace now, flanked by the two heavy infantry divisions sent with them. As they approached the breached gates, Adnu heard the blast of a horn, and watched as the soldiers who were before standing so resolutely in their way drew off from the walls, allowing the Casseians safe passage into the town. "What happened?" Adnu thought to himself, "Maybe they're surrendering, maybe the realized the futility of their position."

    "Not on your life," Esdyn grunted, obviously reading his old friend's face, "They're simply withdrawing to a better position. This battle is far from over."

    The troops entered through the gates and gave the orders to halt. Esdyn told his men to wait in place, and then he walked off towards the other divisions. He appeared to be giving orders to their captains. It was at this moment that Adnu realized just how respected Esdyn was within the army, and he was amazed that this man was his friend. Soon Esdyn came walking back, as the Rycalawre and the Taceitos began marching to the right, away from where the main force had withdrawn.

    "Where are they going?" asked one of the soldiers.

    "Oh, nowhere special, you'll find out soon enough," Esdyn responded. "Anyways, let's move out, we've got work to do." Esdyn waved at the two remaining divisions to follow, the Cwmyr and the Drwdae, and then ordered his men to march forward. They marched for quite awhile, and much to the divisions dismay, most of it was uphill. However, no one complained, as they had done so much during training in Germania, and even on the march to Brato. Finally the division reaches an area where the hill began to level off; they were at the top of the city. They turned to the right, and straight in front of them, no more than 40 meters ahead was another division of spearmen, and beside them was a division of Taceitos.

    "Form up!" Esdyn ordered. The men quickly joined up and tightened their line. Beside them stood the Cwmyr, champions who needed no orders, they formed up out of habit. Suddenly behind them a loud yelling began. The Drwdae had begun their chants. The Drwdae on the Aedui side began with chants of their own. Each side bowed their heads and began to make invocations to their various gods. Adnu began praying for his safety, that he would live to see the end of the war. Soon the loud chants on both sides quieted and eventually stopped. The spearmen on the Aeduic side squatted a little, and lifted their shields up, covering their body, whilst lifting their spears over their head, the Casseians did likewise. Then Esdyn began a loud, blood curdling cry, which soon everyone in the division echoed, as they began running headlong into the Aedui. The Aedui captain mirrored Esdyn, and soon the two forces were charging into one another. As the two forces began to close in on one another, Adnu began to eye his adversary, he narrowed in on the man and sprinted to meet him.

    The two forces collided with a clap as shields collided, and men were killed on both sides. Adnu had managed to shove his opponent down to the ground with his shield before finishing him with his spear. Adnu felt the adrenaline surge through his body in response to his success, however had little time to enjoy is as two spear thrust quickly came straight for him. He deflected both with his shield, and then returned to the favor with attacks of his own, one met with success, and he felled his second man of the day. He glanced up for a second and noticed that the Aedui Taceitos had engaged the Cwmyr. "I hope those Midlanders are as good as they say they are," he thought to himself, "For if not, we will be in a lot of trouble."

    ***

    Berdic remained calmly upon his horse, watching the carnage taking place just an hundred yards before him. Soon the enemy would tire and the time would come. He may not be able to win the battle, but he wanted to take as many Casseian swine with him as possible. Meanwhile, to his right his son squirmed in his horse. "Calm yourself," Berdic said.

    "I can't take it anymore," Cador said, and then began to dismount from his horse.

    "What on earth are you doing?" Berdic asked.

    "I am doing my duty. You may be content to sit here and watch the action from afar, but I have a sense of duty. As Prince, I am honor bound to protect my people, and that is exactly what I am doing."

    With that, he drew his sword and ran out towards the action. Berdic made no effort to stop him. "Fool."

    ***

    Adnu narrowed in on yet another spearman. He deflected the man's spear thrust, and then plunged his spear into the man's exposed torso, sending him to the ground. He looked up, and noticed that his division was winning, they were pushing the Aedui further into the town square. But he also noticed the exhaustion on the men's faces, and in their laborious attacks and defenses. The green troops had never been in a fight this long and this concentrated. Whether or not the day would be theirs would be decided entirely by how quickly the battle progressed.

    He looked to his right, the Cwmyr were holding strong, as the Taceitos fell like water upon the rocks that were those hardened veterans, some having even fought in the Germanic war. They would not fall. Finally, Adnu scanned the line for his friend. Since the battle had begun, they had become separated. Finally he saw the glint of the son on his helmet. His sword was held high, and it ran red with blood. Suddenly out of the corner of his eye Adnu saw a spear tip coming straight for him. He shifted his head sharply, the spearhead just missing him. Adnu shoved with his shield, causing his attacker to recoil backwards. Adnu took the opportunity to shove his spear into the man's ribs. Adnu had little time to revel in his success, however, as two more spearmen promptly stepped over their felled comrade and took a stance opposite Adnu. There was no end to these spearmen.

    ***

    Berdic, meanwhile, continued to watch the fight with seeming disinterest. His men were faring poorly, but that was not to be unexpected. In order to defeat this division, some sacrifices will have to be made. Suddenly several of the soldiers from the conflict came running up, bearing another in their arms. "Well, what do you want? Get back to the fight!" Berdic ordered as they approached.

    "But sir, it's your son, he's been killed in battle. It took all of our efforts just to get him back to you."
    Berdic was silent. "Don't you even want to look at him sir?" they inquired after a few moments.

    Berdic glanced down at his son. He was barely recognizable. His helmet was dented in several places, and the whole of his body was covered in blood. Berdic said nothing, not a tear was shed. A bit of time transpired, and, realizing they would not be receiving any more orders, the soldiers continued to carry Cador towards the palace.

    "Now is the most crucial part of the battle," Berdic said finally. "The Prince has died, so our men are wavering, however their men are probably tired as well. It's up to us to carry the day. Come men! Follow me into the deep and we shall be the victors!" The bodyguard cheered, and then spurred their horses behind Berdic, forming a wedge as their horses entered into a full gallop.

    ***

    Adnu glared at his adversary from behind his shield. He could see the fear in the man's eyes. The result of the battle was now apparent. Casseian victory was inevitable. The Aedui soldiers were beginning to fear for their lives. Adnu took advantage of this and thrust his spear at the man, arching it around the man's shield and straight into the man's throat. Adnu couldn't believe it, victory was theirs! The battle was all but won, and he had survived! However his moment of joy was interrupted by a lout roar coming from behind the Aedui line. He looked up and saw a group of horsemen bearing down on them, at full gallop. They lowered their spears, pointing them directly at the Casseian line.

    The Casseian spearmen were caught completely by surprise. They were tired, and were not expecting a second wave of troops to attack them. The spears of the cavalry ripped through the first line, impaling men on their long spears, while their horses trampled over even the strongest shields. Madness ensued upon the battlefield as the cavalry began to wreak havoc on all in their path.

    Thankfully, Adnu had managed to notice the Cavalry just managed to skirt around the horseman trying to kill him. When the soldier's horse slowed down, Adnu took advantage of the opportunity presented and thrust at the horse. The horse fell, knocking the man to the ground, allowing Adnu to dispatch the man at his leisure. Adnu then looked around to survey the battlefield.

    The line was shaken, but was still holding strong. The question was for how much longer. He looked over to the Midlanders. They were off to the side, and so did not experience the brunt of the charge, as Esdyn's division had. Adnu then looked over to his friend, and felt another surge of adrenaline rush through him out of sheer horror.

    Esdyn was busily engaged with two more spearmen. Being the leader of the division, and a respected soldier besides, Esdyn had naturally placed himself in the place of greatest resistance. Because of this, he was largely unaffected by the initial charge. However, Adnu watch now as a horseman, presumably the King due to the quality of his armor, and the crown he war on his helmet, made his way through the crowd, and plunged his spear into Esdyn neck, penetrating a gap in his otherwise very protective armor. Esdyn fell to the ground, dead on the field.

    Adnu heard himself scream in despair, and heard many others who must've seen the same thing as Adnu do the same. He felt the disposition of the spearmen change; some even began to turn around and try to force their way through the crowd and back to camp. Adnu, however, was unconcerned. He felt everything leave; his hopes, his fears, his desires, all slip away as his sights narrowed towards the man who killed his best friend. He began to push his way through the crowd, sending friend and foe alike to the ground as he made his way to the soldier. He came right up to the man's horse and grabbed the man to the ground. He landed on his back with a crunch, and Adnu wasted no time ending King Berdic's life by sending his spear tip straight through his head.

    This action turned the tide of the entire battle as men began to not just turn around and resume the fight, but actually to push the Aedui back, inspired by Adnu's show of bravery. Then from the rear of the Aedui line came a loud battle cry as the Taceitos and Rycalawre collided with the Aedui rear. They engaged for no more than a few minutes until the Aedui in unison dropped their weapons to the ground and surrendered to the Casse, the battle was theirs.

    A few minutes later the army had made their way to the town square and had proceeded to tear the Aedui banner down with gusto, simultaneously raising one of their own. The whole of the army, even the men outside the city, cheered for their great victory, the first blow had been dealt to the Aedui.

    All save one, that is. Back among the dead was Adnu. He kneeled beside the corpse of his long time friend, and wept.
    "You must know, then, that there are two methods of fight, the one by law, the other by force: the first method is that of men, the second of beasts; but as the first method is often insufficient, one must have recourse to the second. It is therefore necessary for a prince to know well how to use both the beast and the man.
    -Niccolo Machiavelli


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    Haha! I did it, the section is up, as promised, and on schedule too!

    So, this marks the first portion of the story to actually contain some action in it (You know, aside from the occasional duel), so I am eager to hear your thoughts.

    Comments on the overall story thus far would be nice as well.

    Now, as for the fourth and final section of this chapter, I'm going to outline it tomorrow, and, depending on the length, you should see it up sometime this weekend.

    Alright that's about it. As always, I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it, and now I'm off to bed, for I am tired, and I have school tomorrow :( .

    *Edit* Oh and just so you guys know, part 3 marked the 50th post in this little thread of mine, whoop whoop!
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    "You must know, then, that there are two methods of fight, the one by law, the other by force: the first method is that of men, the second of beasts; but as the first method is often insufficient, one must have recourse to the second. It is therefore necessary for a prince to know well how to use both the beast and the man.
    -Niccolo Machiavelli


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    Well, I really liked the last chapter. Actually, im liking all of this. Its a shame people are turned off about the lack of pictures. I think your writing style is just great and what we need here in the AAR sections. Keep it up. Im always reading this.

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