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    Beginning Again, Fresh

    My days during the cold season of that year were spent within the
    walls of the city of Seleukeia. This city was named for a long
    dead Hellene whose family had been friends then enemies to the
    current kingdom of the Hellenes. It was a large city, similar to
    Alexandreia in Aigyptos or Demetreia in Syria. It was not as
    clean or orderly as Demetreia and there were still many signs of
    the Persian occupation within the city.

    Antigonos was forced to spent his much of his time dealing with
    the complex issues of management and government. I stood
    guard over many meetings but I rarely knew what his advisors
    were talking about. There were many mentions of Antigonos'
    father, the king of the Hellenes, and his building projects back in
    the Hellenes' homeland. Antigonos did not enjoy these matters
    of management. He left most of the minor tasks to his advisors
    or his sister's husband.

    Many members of Antigonos' family were in the city or came to
    visit him there. When we arrived, his sister and her husband, the
    man who had taken the city from the Persians, were in the city.
    They had taken to the task managing the newly conquered city.
    After only a few days in the city, General Antigonos was joined by
    his wife and young son, whom he had written to telling of his
    intent of wintering the army at Seleukeia. When the war had
    started, his son had just been born. By this time he was already
    two years of age and had spent little time with his father.

    Antigonos spent as much of his time he could with this wife and
    son. He preferred privacy when with his family and often order all
    of the royal guards out of his private quarters. When I did see him
    with his family, he was like a completely different man from the
    one I had known. While campaigning, he was a strong leader who
    seemed almost unbreakable. He rarely spoke with the men of the
    army or even his guard. He had no friends and spoke only of
    business. He seemed to be at all times a soldier and a leader,
    who would do whatever was necessary to win no matter the cost.

    When he was with his family, he acted entirely different. He was
    still the vain nobleman, but he seemed much softer and weaker.
    He was like any other man that loved his family and wanted to
    spend his time with them. He played with this child, spoke at
    length with his wife, and spent his time relaxing and avoiding the
    problems that were often just outside his door.

    I was reminded of my father, back when I was a child and my
    mother still lived. Antigonos had the same look in his eyes I had
    seen in my father's when he and my mother had watched me play
    along the banks of the great river back at my village. With all the
    marching, suffering, death, and war I had seen over the
    preceeding years, it was nice to be reminded of the peaceful
    times in this world.

    When I saw General Antigonos' weaker side when with his family,
    I did not loose respect for him. I felt that this man was even more
    worth defending.

    When I was not working for Captain Damatrios and the royal guards,
    or doing my fair share of relaxing, I spent my time with Alys and
    Duratios looking for signs of spies and assassins in the city. Alys
    had heard from his contacts within the city that Mitrozaban himself
    had entered the city and was making another plan against Antigonos'
    life.

    The city had its own network of spies that had been set up when the
    city fell to the Hellenes, but Alys prefered not to rely on them. We
    worked independant of them and did all our own work. Alys insisted
    on avoiding contact with the spy network or sharing information. I
    wondered if this was due to some kind of rivalry Alys had with
    Seleukeia's spymaster? It did not matter. We were always several
    steps ahead of the spy network, though alway one or two behind
    Mitrozaban.

    Everyday we searched the city, from the palace to the slums, from
    the desert to the river. For the first month, we found very little, only
    whispers and rumors. From what we heard, Mitrozaban and his
    agents were within the city but we knew not where.

    Mitrozaban had taken to hiding somewhere within the Persian quarter
    of the city, where he was hidden by the locals. With this information,
    Captain Damatrios advised sending in troops and harshly punishing
    those who helped any Persian spies or assassins. Antigonos was did
    not wish to be disturbed during this time. His sister's husband was
    convinced that such an act would only cause greater troubles for the
    Hellenes from the Persian settlers and locals peoples.

    It was the deep of winter but we saw no snow here. Around this
    time, Duratios got a lead of an assassin plot against Antigonos.
    With much effort and initiative, Duratios had found a location where
    a Persian agent was said to be hiding within the city. Once again
    we took this information to Antigonos' brother-in-law. We requested
    additional guards to take the man by force but instead the
    information was passed on to the city's spymaster. He sent one of
    his own men into the Persian quarter and quietly had the man killed
    without even questioning him.

    The body was brought to us. Though angry over not being able to
    deal with the situation ourselves, we inspected the body. He was a
    young man, and I did not recognize him. Alys was able to identify
    him as an agent of the Persian army, though he was not Mitrozaban.
    This was a younger, inexperienced assassin who may not have
    even been connected to the man we sought. Still, a man who
    wished harm on our leader was dead, and that is a victory. However,
    the local city spies got all of the credit for the kill.

    There were continued rumors of Mitrozaban and his agents, but they
    made no visable move. Once a servant of the palace was found to
    be plotting to poison the food, but failed. Other than the "normal"
    security problem a "prince" has, there were no major attempts on
    Antigonos' life made that winter. Rumors were building that
    Mitrozaban had a plan and would strike some time in the spring
    or summer.

    As that spring came, Antigonos made a short trip north. He visited
    his rebellious cousin [Euktimenos Idomeneus] in the city of Arbela.
    There, he recognized the coming of age of his cousin's son.
    Rumors were that this cousin's son was more like his grandfather
    [Pefkolaos Idomeneus, the man who had started the Makedonian
    Civil War] than his father. They said he sought power and had
    claimed that he was the rightful king. I do not know any of the men
    in that family, so I cannot judge. Duratios was convinced there
    would be another war amoungst the Hellenes if this young man
    came to power. Although Duratios jumps at any shadow and sees
    trouble where there is none. Perhaps this fear... or should it be
    called insight? Perhaps this insight of his was why he was
    assigned to work with Alys and I hunting assassins.



    While we were in Arbela, we encountered no problems with
    Persian agents. Antigonos' cousin had his own spies and royal
    guards protecting him and the city was quite secure. I found it
    odd that the general's cousin had more royal guards around him
    then he had.

    We recieved word, in Arbela, that the Persians were starting the
    campaign season early. After defending for two years, the
    Persians finally made a effort to attack. An army lead personally,
    by the Persian king, Koyroun, attacked the Hellenic garrison,
    commanded by Antigonos' uncle, down by the coast where the
    two rivers met the sea.



    So far, this war had been fought by the sons of the Persian king
    and the son of the Hellenic king. The old king of Persia [in the west]
    now was personally leading his men into battle against us. From
    what I overheard from Antigonos' advisors, the Persian king was not
    a great fighter and was best left to administration. They said this
    was a symbolic act and if placed in a test of wits, he would make
    mistakes. Soon we would see if this was true.



    Since spring had arrived, the army was already preparing for
    campaign. Antigonos sent word to Seleukeia to prepar the army.
    By the time we had returned to the city, his generals had prepared
    the army to march.

    Because of the losses the army had taken in the first two years,
    this spring saw fresh replacements in the ranks. Some of the new
    soldiers were loyalist troops from the fallen Kingdom of Babylon
    and some mercenary archers from Persia. I was unsure if foreign
    troops would fight well alongside the Hellenes, but my old unit was
    still in the army and we had been quite successful.

    I do not know what happened to the plans of Mitrozaban within the
    city of Seleukeia. Antigonos only spent a couple days in the city
    before marching out with the army. Had there been any plans, there
    was now know target for them.

    The army marched eastward along the far bank of the river Tigris then
    crossed over to the old royal roadway. News came to us that a
    Persian army was on the royal road to our east. Antigonos ordered
    the army to slow its march and to wait and see what the Persians
    would do.



    With us delayed, the garrison to the south would have to hold out on
    their own. Only one other army was in the area and it was an army of
    veterans from Aigyptos and new recruits from Arabia. As the dry
    season approached, this army would have to fight a battle with
    Persians trying to reinforce their king.

    News arrived of their battle while we were still marching eastward.
    The Persian army nearer to us had retreated back into their own
    lands and we pushed forward slowly. But our delay meant that the
    Aigyptoi and Arabians would have to fight without us. The report said
    that they had choosen to attack the Persian reinforcements as they
    tried to cross a river ford.



    They held their ground and used the river to prevent the Persians
    from flanking them or overwhelming them with greater numbers. As
    the Persians crossed, they were there to meet them on the banks.



    The result of the battle was a complete success. The Aigyptoi and
    Arabians held back the Persians. Those Persians who survived the
    battle either drown in the river or surrendered.

    With his reinforcements wiped out, the Persian king broke his siege
    down by the sea and retreated back into Persia. Antigonos
    considered giving chase to the Persian king and his army, but the
    Persians retreated into the mountains. Antigonos did not wish to
    wander the mountains for a second year and instead chose to head
    northwards.



    We headed north. Before we crossed into enemy territory,
    Antigonos received another messenger. This time he was from the
    far south. A kingdom in Arabia had fought a battle against another
    one. The friendly kingdom had won but lost most of its army. The
    messenger requested aid from Antigonos. The Arabians wanted
    troops to defend their city. Antigonos gave them only money to raise
    a new army of their own. The messenger was unhappy but took the
    money and returned to his home. I recall Antigonos' advisors telling
    him that the friendly kingdom was doomed to fall, but Antigonos
    chose not to divert troops from the war against the Persians.



    By the time the hottest part of the year was over, we were at the
    walls of a Persian city. We still did not have the equipment to take
    a city, but Antigonos was convinced he could get the Persians to
    come out and fight him. Our army surrounded the city and we
    began the siege. All around us there were Persian armies, but
    Antigonos was confident of a victory. His vigor and strength had
    truely returned. The army saw his confidence and morale grew. We
    would be marching toward victory once again.


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    Great chapter, I really like this picture!
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    I would be seriously worried with so many Persians around
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    another great chapter

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    Great chapter!

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    Thanks.

    There was some really weird terrain in that river-crossing battle. It made things more interesting. There is another battle coming up that also had some awkward terrain.

    I roleplayed the push toward Susa. (Alypios) Antigonos was angry he didn't have a big battle the previous year and refreshed from his winter. The next chapter is "The Battle of Sousa", where all the Persian forces in the region come to challenge Antigonos.


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    Quote Originally Posted by MarcusAureliusAntoninus View Post
    ...The next chapter is "The Battle of Sousa", where all the Persian forces in the region come to challenge Antigonos...
    Wow, sounds epic. Should be a hell of a battle, can't wait!
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    The Persian Gates

    By the time of the fall of the city of Sousa, we had been fighting the
    war against the Persians for three years. The cold winds of winter
    came and left once more. Snows fell in the hills and melted away
    yet again. Spring came and Antigonos prepared to campaign again.
    It was the beginning of the fourth year of the war against Persia, the
    thirteenth year I had served Antigonos, and the thirty-fourth year of
    my life.

    The army had lost many men during the years of warfare and the final
    battle of the previous year had lowered the army's strength to half of
    what it was when the war began. Antigonos' "companions", his noble
    cavalry, had almost entirely been wiped out. Many of the veterans in
    the army were getting old and tired of fighting. The army was
    reinforced, but many of the new soldiers were raw recruits or poorly
    equiped men of the east. To continue the war, Antigonos needed
    a new army.

    To the west there was another army that was remotedly garrisoned
    without a purpose. It was commanded by the husband of one of
    Antigonos' sisters. This was a different man than the one who
    governed Seleukeia, though I do believe I saw him visit the city
    during our time there. This army was recruited just before the war
    from places called Pontos, Ionia, and regions nearer the Hellenes'
    homelands.

    When this army arrived in the spring, Antigonos took command of
    them and left the city of Sousa. All of the royal guards and most of
    the surviving companions went with Antigonos. We left the old army
    behind to defend the city. I had made, and lost, many friends in the
    old army. I said my farewells to those who still lived and travelled
    with the general, eastwards again.



    We heard news that Aram, the man who should have been king of the
    Persians, was to the east and Antigonos sought a battle against him.
    By the time we arrived at the mountains that divided the Hellenes'
    territory and the Persians' territory, our spies reported he had moved
    north. He was moving from the Persian capital and heading for the
    Persian regional capital to the north, the same one we had approached
    two years earlier but not attacked [Ekbatana, Media].

    The army marched eastward. We crossed a couple rivers, crossed
    over some hills, then came to the mountains. These were the
    mountains that separated the homeland of the Persians and were
    only crossable in a place called the "Persian Gates". We came to
    this pass and found the camp of the Aigyptoi and Arabians allies.

    Still we heard no news of Mitrozaban or any other assassins. Alys
    was growing frustrated at that fact. He broke with his normal silent
    personality on one occation and expressed how angry he was at the
    fact we had not been able to capture Mitrozaban in Seleukiea. Alys
    was growing quite old and it seemed he was wishing for one last
    victory in his life.

    When we arrived at the "Persian Gates", we set up came along side
    the allied army. I there were men from the great river in that army
    and was curious if there were any in that army that spoke the same
    language as me or even could have come from the same village.
    Once while patrolling for Persian agents, I visited their camp. I
    walked through the camp for most of a day, talking with the soldiers
    there. I was mostly checking for any signs of Persian agents or
    collaberators in that army, but I was also interesting in what type of
    soldiers came were there who came from the same lands as I.

    Near the end of that day, I was surprised to find a man that was from
    very near the same area as I, he even knew the name of my father. I
    spent the rest of that day talking with him of our homeland. He was
    one of the younger sons of the village head of a town downstream from
    my home. My father had visited his father many times to trade.
    When he met me, he was surprised at my clothing and position. I
    was the son of a poor hunter and he the son of a successful village
    head, but now I was the wearing the expensive clothing.

    Because he was a younger son and his father would leave little to him,
    he had decided to make a life for himself and leave his home. With his
    horse, he had joined the armies of the Hellenes and gone on quite a
    journey through Arabia. He told me all about his travels through the
    deserts and of the battles he fought. We spoke together several more
    times and he introduced me to a couple of his friends who had been
    raised close to where we had both been born. They all told me the
    stories of their lives and of their journeys through Arabia. I enjoyed
    speaking in my native tongue, but my new friends and I were soon
    parted.

    All of the soldiers who had come from the lands of the great river were
    rewarded for their years of service. They had been in the military and
    fighting for a year or two longer than I had. Their successes against the
    kingdoms of Arabia were greatly rewarded by Antigonos. To each man
    a grant of land along the great river or a gift of gold was given. They
    separtated from the Arabians and were allowed to go home or to
    wherever the wind carried them. I said farewell to my newfound friends
    of my homeland and we all went our separate ways.



    Antigonos' plan was for the men of Arabia to be the reinforcements
    for the new army as we crossed over the mountains and struck at
    the head of the Persian serpent. Events to the south changed this
    plan. Once again the enemy kingdom in Arabia attacked the friendly
    one. This time, they brought even more soldiers and the friendly
    kingdom had even less. The reports from the messengers said that
    the king of the friendly kingdom bravely lead his men into battle and
    managed to hold out for quite some time.



    When the enemies outflanked the city from the far side and killed
    the good king, the army fled back to their homes. The messengers
    say that the Hellenes who commanded the army of the friendly
    kingdom tried to defend the city for as long as they could. They
    could not hold out long.



    This friendly kingdom fell to the kingdom of those who apposed the
    Hellenes easily once its army was defeated and its king killed.
    Antigonos took the message without much emotion. He seemed
    to be expecting that the kingdom would fall and did not care much
    when it did. However, the next kingdom in line to fall to this enemy
    was one that Antigonos wished to hold onto. The Arabians who
    were at the time assisting us were from this kingdom. They afraid
    for their homeland. In a sign of friendship and support, Antigonos
    ordered these Arabians back to their homeland to defend it from the
    enemy kingdom in Arabia. He even ordered that a newly built fleet
    be used to ferry them back there.

    The old army was weakened and forced to defend Sousa, the
    Aigyptoi had been retired, and the Arabians were now returning to
    their homeland. With only this new army, we had to stand on our
    own when attacking at the very heart of Persia.


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    Wonderful update!


    Italians do it better! Chi dice donna dice guai. Abbi donna di te minore, se vuoi essere signore. Donne e buoi dei paesi tuoi. Fiume, grondaia e donna parlatora mandano l'uomo di casa fuora.
    And my personal favorite: "Non rimuovere il confine antico fissato dai tuoi padri". In english: "Do not remove the anchent border placed by your fathers". It looses something in the translation......

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    Thanks, Cyrus.

    That chapter was meant to be a couple paragraphs long and be just an intro, but I ended up dronning on again. The content that was meant to be the bulk of the chapter will be in the next. I'll probably work on that tonight or tommorrow.


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    The Persian Homeland

    We no longer had any allied armies to reinforce our army but the
    supply lines behind us were safe and the new army was well
    rested. General Antigonos was ready for the next move and
    ordered the army over the mountains. There were signs of
    defensive positions on the "Persian Gates" but the few men
    stationing them retreated as soon as they saw us. There was
    no resistance at all.

    Once out of the mountains, we began moving northeast. Once
    out of the mountains, Antigonos ordered the army to begin looting
    the villages and towns. He was trying to draw the Persians into a
    battle in which we could defend. For several months, we had
    complete control over the countryside. There was no sign of the
    Persians and the general began to consider setting up some sort
    of government to control the regions we now occupied on this
    eastern side of the "Persian Gates".

    I did not like these lands, they were dry but with few rivers. There
    were some Hellenes in these regions, but fewer than we had seen
    at the city of Sousa. The great man named Alexandros had spread
    this far in his conquests and even further. When I had heard the
    stories of the great Alexandros, I never imagined how far his soldiers
    had to march. He must have truely marched to the ends of the earth.
    I feared we may have to do the same.

    It was near the time of the year when the cold season began to
    approach that we finally found Persians to fight. Two huge armies
    approached us from the south and the west. Antigonos chose a good
    place to defend, where we held the highground, and we waited.

    The army took up position on flat ground, half way up a hill. Because
    of the difficult terrain around the edges of the hill, the Persians were
    forced to approach us from below. The old army had been armed with
    spears, but this new one was trained to fight only with sword. Our
    position on the slopes meant that the swords would have an advantage.



    The first Persian army came up from the south. They marched up
    the hill and spread out to try to flank the line. Antigonos' choice in
    battlefield made this impossible and the Persians were forced to
    attack our center. A small Persian force came up the hill and
    tested our line while the majority waited just below the crest.



    The small force sent to test the line did not take much for the
    infantry to defeat. The infantry from Pontos held their position and
    did not follow the Persians down the hill when they gave up the fight.
    Still the majority of the Persians refused to come all the way up the
    hill. Antigonos decided that it was time to force the Persians to
    move and sent his cavalry down the hill to the southeast.



    When the cavalry attacked, the Persians reorganized their line to
    defend themselves from the horsemen. This was the sign that
    Antigonos was waiting for and he ordered the first line of infanty
    forward. With horsemen running behind them and Pontic infantry
    moving down in front of them, the Persians paniced and charged
    the infantry line to their front. The infantry pushed forward and
    quickly broke their attackers. The Persians paniced again and
    were chased down from the hill.



    When the first army of the Persians began to flee, the second
    army was already near. Antigonos ordered the second line of
    infantry to form a line facing west. We once again waited. As the
    first row of infantry returned from their chase, they took position
    behind the second and rested where they could reinforce if needed.



    Antigonos mounted his horse and lead his companions and the
    Hellenic cavalry down the hill to the south. The two lines of Pontic
    infantry then began to slowly march down the hill to the west. I sat
    on the top of the hill and once again watched my general lead a
    charge into the weakest point of the Persian lines. The Persians
    did not wish to fight after this charge and turned to move from the
    field. Antigonos signalled to the infantry and they came charging
    down the hill and into the Persians with their backs turned.
    Antigonos ordered his cavalry in and watched as his army crushed
    the armies of Persia.



    Captain Damatrios ordered the royal guard down from the command
    post as the battle came to and end. We joined General Antigonos
    at the base of the hill. Around him, the men of the army were already
    looting the dead Persians. These Persians had all been poor and
    carried almost nothing of value. Even their weapons were hadly worth
    the material from which they were made.

    More than half of the second army left the battlefield alive and
    retreated to the south. The dead Persians numbered tens of
    thousands while ours was was just over one thousand. Many of the
    Persians, who had not escaped southward, deserted the army or
    surrendered to our soldiers. From the survivors of this battle, we
    first learned of the problems over succession to the Persian throne.
    Aram had been next in line to be King of Persia, but a man named
    Parkev had been raised to the throne in their western capital. Aram
    had sought to contend this and withdrew his forces to that capital,
    leaving these lands defenseless.

    Just to our south the main capital of the entire Persian Empire was
    within our grasp. Antigonos knew the prestige that would come with
    taking this ledgendary city and could not let such an oppertunity
    pass him up. He gathered the army and gave a great speech to the
    men about the honor we would all soon have. The army was entirely
    behind him and ready for the attack on the city. We began the
    march to the south.



    Even though we had just heard of the problems in the Persian
    Empire, they were already concluded. By the time we reached the
    main Persian capital, the Persians had already chosen their king.
    To our north, the new King of Persia, King Parkev, was marching
    an army toward us that outnumbered us two to one.


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    Just...plain

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    haha King Parkev? why does the Persian King have an Armenian name?
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    Well the "Persians" are actually Hayasdan. I could have made up a name to make it more Persian, but I'm bad at making up names and just posted what his name actually is.

    Though, it can be roleplayed. He is actually the king of Media and dual monarch with the kings of Parni. When Hayasdan fell, the king of Hayasdan was in Hyrkania and his decendants intermarried with the kings of Media. I can roleplay that that is where some of the Armenian names and such came from...


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    In any case, great AAR! I'm enjoying it much!
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    Quote Originally Posted by MarcusAureliusAntoninus View Post


    awesome screeny

    and a great chapter too

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    Thanks. I almost didn't add that picture of Antigonos, but I had spent the time to set it up and put it in there anyways.

    I'm working on the next chapter but I've been busy with University lately. "The Battle of Persepolis" is coming up tommorrow or so...


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    The next chapter ended up being somewhat long. I'm going to break it up into a couple pieces and post one a day for the next couple days. This first one is just a short story segment...


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    Forgotten to the Ages

    During our time of conquest in the homelands of the Persians, we
    saw little sign of the enemy assassins, spies, and agents that had
    bothered us so greatly during the years in the lands to the north.
    Mitrozaban had made attempts against Antigonos' life almost
    monthly two years prior but in those times there was no sign of
    him. Because the age of Mitrozaban, Duratios suggested that he
    may have simply died or even retired. Alys feared that the spies in
    Seleukeia may have caught him after we had left the city and
    deprived us of our rightful kill.

    Although we had all worked to find Mitrozaban, Alys had dedicated
    almost all of his time during those years to finding that man. Now
    he had vanished and Alys had felt as if he would never achieve his
    victory. The gods made certain of that fact when Alys died while
    we besieged the Persian capital. Alys had grown quite old and
    gotten sick during that campaign. Once we set up camp around
    the Persian capital he seemed to improve but then died during the
    night, in his sleep.



    For four years, Duratios and I had worked with Alys searching for
    agents and defending our general. During that time, Alys had
    barely spoken of anything but our work. To me he did not feel to
    be a friend or even a comrade, but I felt great respect for the man.
    Even though my father had been a kind and open man, the death
    of Alys reminded me of the day when the men returned to the
    village and told me my father had died in battle. Alys would be
    missed, not simply for his knowledge and skill with the secret arts.

    In less than a month a Hellene, who was trained in Syria for the
    arts of dealing with enemy agents, arrived in the camp. His name
    was Kallistratos, and he was to replace Alys. He was much more
    open and friendlier than Alys but that almost seemed to make him
    weaker. He was older and better trained than Duratios and I, but
    we had experience. Though he was in charge, it was I who
    basically lead all actions against Persian agents.



    As if reborn, the Persians came for us all at once. Their problems
    had passed and they were ready to fight with us once more. First
    we saw signs of Persian agents, then scouts, and finally came the
    army of Persia, lead by their king. The new Persian king, King
    Pakor (Parkev) would personally face General Antigonos on the
    field of battle.
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    The Battle of Persepolis (134BC)

    It was nearly winter once more when we first saw the first signs of
    the Persian army. It was a huge army with soldiers from all over the
    Persian Empire. About a third of the army was cavalry and this
    great number of horses would prove to be a very important factor.
    The new rulers of the Persians, King Pakor, and his son, Vardan,
    were leading the army. They planned to stop us where we stood
    and wipe us out, to the man.

    General Antigonos' understanding of battlefields once again gave
    our army an advantage. The army took up position on the side of
    a mountain with a hillside so steep we thought nobody could climb
    up it in battle. Because of this, Antigonos set up the two lines of
    infantry on either side of the steep slope where the hill was easier
    to climb.

    When the Persians took the field, they slowly moved forward and
    the archers from Hellas let loose their arrows to rain down on them.
    A part of me missed the days when I would rain arrows down on
    the enemies, take cover, and wait for the battle to end. For me,
    things had gotten much more complicated. Those days were a
    lifetime ago even though it had truely only been a three years back.

    The Persians marched through the rain of arrows. At first it seemed
    that their army was dividing into two parts to climb up either side of
    the hill, but then we saw that they would divide into three. While two
    small groups moved up the sides of the hill to attack both flanks,
    most of the Persians began a charge straight up the steep hillside.
    Quickly Antigonos ordered the line to form up at the top of the hill.
    Due to the flankers, we still required a large force to guard the flanks
    and could not form a strong center.



    First the Persian infantry hit the line, both in the center and on the
    flanks. Then the Persian cavalry made its move. The entire mass
    of horses moved to the east and to our right flank. They turned and
    charged forwad. There were thousands of horses charging with a
    great sound. Up the side slope to the east the horde came
    crashing into the line of Hellenes and "Anatolians".



    The men of our army, only armed with swords, could not hold back
    the horses and thousands died. The line began to be pushed back.
    Antigonos ordered the Hellenic cavalry in, but they stopped by
    flanking detachment of Persian horsemen off to the east of the battle.

    The right flank infantry began to worry and the horses pushed right
    through them. All around me the officers and advisors of Antigonos
    began to panic. One Hellene warned that it was time to retreat and
    that the general should be defended. Captain Damatrios ordered the
    royal guard to take up positions around the general. I strung my
    bow, put it to my side, and drew the Hellenic sword from my belt.



    General Antigonos alone had confidence in his eyes. He ordered
    everyone back to where they were and called for his horse. An
    old advisor told him to flee the battle, but he would not even hear
    him speak.

    Once on his horse, Antigonos lead his companions forward. First
    they charged east and broke the battle where the Hellenic cavalry
    was held down. Then, gathering all the horsemen around him, he
    turned back west and toward the battle. There, on that eastern
    hillside, General Antigonos lead a couple thousand Hellenes on
    horse against ten thousand Persian cavalry who were supported
    by several thousand Persians soldiers.



    Encouraged by their general, the Hellenic cavalry fought fiercely
    against the exhausted Persians. The flank of the Persians was
    weakend. Once again, our infantry were pushing back the enemy.
    Even on the western flank, the infantry pushed back the Persians
    and began to work their way around the rear of the Persian line.



    Antigonos ordered his cavalry away from the fight to rest, but once
    again had to confront the Persian cavalry in the open. The two
    great divisions of cavalry charged right at eachother and clashed
    at the base of the steep hill. There, Antigonos found and slew the
    hier to the Persian throne. Prince Vardan fell dead and his men
    scattered.



    When I saw Antigonos leading his cavalry in another charge of the
    Persians on the eastern flank I knew the battle was ours. There in
    the east, King Pakor was surrounded by Antigonos and his horses.
    Separated from his guards, the newly crowned Persian king fell to
    a common soldier from the lands called Pontos.



    With their king and his heir both dead, the Persians were leaderless
    and lost their will to fight. Chased down the hill, the Persians gave
    up the field and Antigonos won another great victory against the
    Persians. However, the cost of the battle was great. More than ten
    thousand in our army were now dead. This one battle had cost the
    Kingdom of the Hellenes almost as much as the entire rest of the
    war combined. The Persians lost about the same number and then
    another ten thousand deserted.



    A few weeks later the garrison from the city combined with the
    reserves from the dead king's army and attacked us again. This
    time we had all of the advantages and the battle went exactly how
    Antigonos had planned it.



    Only a few in our army fell that battle, but more than a third of the
    men who had marched into these lands no longer drew breath.
    Antigonos had drawn the Persians into a great battle and had
    pulled a victory out from it.



    The great cost of the war was beginning to draw on the peoples of
    the region and even on the peoples of both great kingdoms. The
    Persians were finally ready to talk.


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    Steppe battles are very long, but the wars are short.

    Infantry battles aren't as long, but the wars are much longer.

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