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    I haven't had time to write lately. I had a busy weekend then ended up buying "Empire - Total War". So, I've been playing that. I is not what I expected. Everyone was saying it was all new and different, but it just seems to be an upgraded Total War engine. I don't know why people keep saying ancient era mods are impossible, though. Playing shouldn't delay my writting much, but my AAR may end up catching up to where I am in the campaign.

    I'll probably end up starting the new chapter today or tommorrow. Don't expect too much, though. Just for fun, here's a map of Tabriqo's travels in the military:

    Green Dot : Long time camp or long time spent in a city (more than 1 turn in a location)
    Orange Dot : Significant Battle by the army
    Red Dot : Siege by the army

    I have a lot of random maps that I draw when bored, thought I'd start sharing some that have to do with this AAR.
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    I like maps. Was he recruited in Diospolis? How long is he underway by now?

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    Oops, I forgot to add the key. Edited that post to show what the dots mean.
    Quote Originally Posted by Centurio Nixalsverdrus View Post
    I like maps. Was he recruited in Diospolis? How long is he underway by now?
    I think he was recruited in Pselkis but the army was gathered in Diospolis before heading out. It should be almost 15 years since he joined the army at this point in the campaign. I had meant to add a dot for his homeland but forgot to. It is just south of the Pselkis-Meroe province border.


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    Fire and Ice

    I fell asleep during the early morning. I did not sleep long. While
    the sun was still new in the sky, General Antigonos called all of
    his advisors, generals, the Royal Guards, all the soldiers who had
    been guarding the estate into the courtyard.

    There, within the walls of this Persian mansion, were the men who
    had started the fire. They were hung up on upright timber in the
    same way thieves, traitors, or enemy agents were punished by the
    army. I had seen and done this to many who were thought to be
    spies. This was different. These men were soldiers of the
    Hellenes' kingdom and were only guilty of harming their enemy.

    From the stories I heard later, the men had been looting the city
    during the evening of the day before. They were in the poor section
    of the town. The soldiers had met up with some Persians who they
    believed were being rude. When the soldiers demanded the
    Persians apologize, the Persians fled into a building and locked the
    doors behind them. Perhaps encouraged by wine, the soldiers
    decided to set fire to the building and chase out the Persians. The
    fire spread quickly and burned a whole section of the lower city
    before it was stopped.

    The next morning, Antigonos had those seven men executed before
    all our eyes. Some of the General's generals protested but the
    strength of his resolve on the matter ended the protest quickly.
    Word spread quickly through the city, and soon all knew the cost
    of breaking an order of General Antigonos. The act enspired
    confidence in the troops and morale seemed to rise. The event also
    covered the rumors of the assassin. News of assassins normally
    would have lowered morale in the army, and this was avoided.

    Kallistratos, Duratios, and I continued our investigation of the
    assassin but found nothing new. Great news came several days
    later when one of the other royal guards approached us with a
    servant of the estate. The servant had reported something to him
    and he thought to bring him to us. The servant, a small Persian
    man, said that a man had talked to him and asked for his help in
    poisoning Antigonos' food. This servant had promised to help the
    man but then came directly to us. He said the man was going to
    bring a special poison the next day to a certain part of the city.
    We told the servant he would not be punished as long as he
    helped us catch the man.

    We took this information to the new captain of the royal guards,
    Captain Theodas. Captain Damatrios would have given any
    resources or men to any plan Alys had conceived, but now both
    Captain Damatrios and Alys were gone. Captain Theodas was a
    Hellene whom they called a Makedone. He was very proud that
    he was so and thought all who were not were less than himself.
    Kallistratos was a Hellene from Syria, Duratios was from the lands
    of Thraikia, and I was born on the great river to the south of the
    Kingdom of the Hellenes. Captain Theodas was not kind to his
    fellow Hellenes and we were not even that. He did not wish to
    help us with our work, but after some convincing by Kallistratos,
    he agreed to give us the command of as many men we needed.

    The following day, the three of us and a small group of soldiers
    were hiding near the location where the servant went to meet with
    the man. We did not have to wait long. A man approached the
    servant, they spoke a moment, the man handed an item to the
    servant, and then they separated. As the man tried to leave,
    Kallistratos, Duratios, and I came out from the building in which
    we were hiding and blocked his path. He saw us, turned, and ran
    the other way. He ran into an alley and right into our soldiers.
    We were close behind him and he could not escape.

    What he had given the servant was poison and he was most
    certainly an assassin from the Persians. We brought the man
    back to the army camp and questioned him. As was normal, he
    knew of no future plans and was simply an agent for a larger
    group. He did tell us who had given him his orders. The
    assassin was an old Persian man named Mitrozaban. It was
    the same Mitrozaban I had seen in the mountains years earlier,
    the same Mitrozaban we had failed to capture in Seleukeia, the
    same Mitrozaban we had thought dead.



    While the Persians fought eachother, my job had been easy.
    Now that they were ready to fight us again, the assassins had
    returned and Mitrozaban was there to lead them.

    We once again played the game of chasing Mitrozaban's
    shadow. Several attempts at sabatoge and assassination were
    caught. None of them since the assassin during that night
    were ever a serious threat. Kallistratos busied himself setting
    up a network of informants. Duratios would walk the poor parts
    of the city and listen for rumors. I spent my time either near
    General Antigonos or partrolling the city and countryside.

    Antigonos administered the conquered city with the army.
    Crimes were strickly punished and the people were restricted
    in their actions. It was not Hades for the people. There were
    no taxes raised and Antigonos made sure the supply of grain
    was controlled. The people of the city were much happier
    than I expected.

    Antigonos had the army reinforce the city walls and prepare for
    a siege. Reinforcements were being recruited in the lands
    between the two rivers to the west, but they would not arrive
    until the spring. Everyone within the city expected another battle.

    Reports from Persia said that Aram, son of King Koyroun, had
    become king. Both the new king and his son were dead so the
    old dynasty was back in power after only a year of absence.
    Aram restored his throne and regained the power of his father.

    Days passed into months and there was no sign of the Persians.
    Scouts reported that Persian forces had completed withdrawn from
    all of the lands of the Persian homeland, and messengers said that
    they were no longer fighting in the lands called Armenia.

    The season of winter came again. Snow could be seen in the
    mountains but the city saw little. When the spring came still war
    did not. Antigonos was ready for a new plan and sent out
    messengers to King Aram and requested they meet.


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    Good chapter!

    I wonder why they have withdrawn their troops, civil war maybe?
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    Something I would really like to see (but I doubt the AI will actually do it) is Phalava or Persia (Hayasdan?, Media? what should I call them? ) finally declaring war on the other and the Persians having a true civil war in the middle of a Makedonian invasion.

    But as you said, they are waaaay too friendly with each other for this to happen.

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    Great chapter as usual. It does seem the Persian are haaving a civil war, maybe MAA used force diplomacy.
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    Great chapter. Perhaps you bring up the Pahlava-half up against the Armenian-half?

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    I love this AAR
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    Steppe battles are very long, but the wars are short.

    Infantry battles aren't as long, but the wars are much longer.

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    Great post. r u goimg to go all the way to india??

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    I appreciate the kind words. Thanks for following.

    I've gotten bogged down in work for Uni and haven't been playing or writing lately. I haven't even visited the forums (other than checking to see if I have PMs) since I posted this last update. I may stay busy for the next couple weeks but may write something during the weekend if I am feeling like it (I've been working on a couple papers and just want to rest my brain most of the time). I haven't yet planned the next chapter, but it will be another pictureless story chapter.

    So far, I've only fought Media-Persia (Hayasdan) although I now share a border with Parthia-Persia (Pahlava). I don't want to spoil anything for the next chapter, but I will say that I have been trying to get the two Persian sides to go to war since the end of the Makedonian Civil War.

    My plan has been to push all the way to India since the beginning. I would have gotten there by now if the Romaioi hadn't betrayed me and 'forced' me to destroy them. I still plan to push east and rebuild Alexandros' empire, but it may still take many years. (Getting to the Indus River may be where this AAR finally concludes if it makes it that long.)
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    On behalf of (well, myself ) and many lurkers I would like to applaud your AAR! I really like the 1st-person point of view; makes it MUCH more authentic.

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    Perhaps its time for an update MAA?

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    It's not dead yet, I just haven't had time. I wrote the majority of the next chapter more than a week ago but didn't ever finish it. I'll try to finish it up and post it in the next couple days... hopefully. I'm also near the end of Tabriqo's story, so I'll see if I can't finish that up to get a better break point before returning to the overview style.


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    Diplomacy (Part I)

    We learned that King Aram of Persian had gathered an army just
    north of the Persian homelands we then occupied. Although the
    army was large, all of our scouts and spies reported its quality very
    low. If they chose to fight us, even without our reinforcements from
    the west, the battle would be a simple victory for our side. The
    generals of army advised Antigonos that we march the army north
    immediately, defeat that army, and capture the Persian king before
    he could gather a true army. Antigonos refused to march forward
    and continued to push for talks with King Aram.

    At the time, I thought it foolish to push for peace when victory was
    in our sight. All of us who doubted General Antigonos soon learned
    of what he already knew. An messenger from the east came to
    meet with Antigonos. He came from the lands of the river called
    Indus, but he was a Hellene. There, on the far side of the Persian
    Empire, Hellenes were also at war against the Persians. We had
    won the war on our side, but they were loosing on their side. The
    messenger's main reason for visiting was to request aid in their war,
    but he also brought news of the gathering of a huge army to our east.

    This man's kingdom was already nearly defeated by the Persians
    and they were moving armies away from that war and westward to
    fight with us. The northern Persian king was ready to move his entire
    force against us. With half of a Hellenic army remaining in the
    conquered Persian capital, it would have been impossible to fight
    these many armies from the north and east. With this information,
    the generals and advisors of Antigonos quieted their requests for war
    and accepted a plan to force the Perians into a subserviant peace.

    Antigonos gave this kingdom to the far east a small amount of silver
    but told them he would not help them as long as they sought the
    destruction of the Hellenistic royal line which was called the Seleukid
    Dynasty. This family had been long friends of Antigonos' family and
    he sought to protect them. It did not come quickly, but several years
    later the war between those two distant Hellenic factions came to an
    end. As promised, Antigonos then sent silver to support both.



    Before we received a formal message from King Aram, another
    messenger from the lands of Arabia came to meet with Antigonos.
    A small kingdom allied to the Hellenes had come under attack of a
    larger enemy kingdom. Although they were outnumbered, the king
    of the small kingdom had won a great victory. Once the enemy
    began assaulting the wall of their capital, the Arab king moved his
    cavalry out from the city and attacked the enemy reserves.



    After defeating the enemy cavalry, the allied king charged the enemy
    general and killed him with an attack from two sides. With broken
    morale and no leadership, the enemies assaulting the walls broke
    formation and were wiped out by the city defenders.



    The messenger was from the allied kingdom and came requesting
    assistance from Antigonos. Their kingdom had been saved, but
    their army was destroyed. Last time a small kingdom to the south
    had requested assistance, Antigonos had sent none. This time
    Antigonos acted very differently. This allied kingdom was just
    across the sea from my homelands and was very important to the
    security of Antigonos' father's kingdom. Antigonos sent word to the
    lands of Syria to gather a force to march south and to this kingdom.
    Another message was sent to his father. Once Antigonos' father
    had agreed with the plan, the army would march south and attack
    the enemy kingdom in Arabia.

    General Antigonos had already begun to shift his attention away
    from the war in Persia by the time King Aram sent word agreeing to
    discussions. For a month, messages were sent between the two
    men. Finally conditions were good for a meeting between Atigonos,
    prince of the Hellenes, and Aram, king of the Persians. The two
    leaders would meet and it would be the task of the Royal Guard to
    protect Antigonos.


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    You're back! Great chapter, as usual.

    I'm curious what you are going to do if the "Great War" is finally finished.
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    Quote Originally Posted by MarcusAureliusAntoninus View Post
    Brilliant picture!

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    Good to see an update.

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    Thanks.

    I've already started the next chapter, so the wait until the next posting shouldn't be as long as this last time.
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    I'm curious what you are going to do if the "Great War" is finally finished.
    There's always another war. I'm still at war with The Iberian Confederacy, Numidia and Mauretania, The Kingdom of Sab'yn, and there is trouble in Gaul that is threatening to undo the balance of powers. Besides, the Persian Empire isn't going to be silent for long, the AI never forgives. But Basileus Philippos V is getting quite old and it is about time to hand over the Arche to his son.
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    Brilliant picture!
    That picture was one of the reasons I chose to even talk about that battle. It really wasn't critical to the story, but I loved that picture.


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    Wow, awesome story you're telling and even more awesomer pictures! Took me a long time to catch up, but now I look forward to the next updates!

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    Thanks BerkeleyBoi. Nice to see you in this forum again.


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    Diplomacy (Part II)

    General Antigonos and King Aram were to meet and discuss the
    end of the war that we had been waging for more than ten years.
    The two leaders would meet in a small town north of the Persian
    capital we then controlled. We prepared to ride north with a
    portion of the army but only the royal guard would join Antigonos
    in the city when he meet with the Persian king. Our scouts
    would search the city first.

    We were all concerned for the safety of General Antigonos. Last
    time he had attempt a peacefully meeting with a Persian leader,
    he had barely survived the encounter. Antigonos said he trusted
    the honor of the new Persian king. We could not argue with our
    leader, we could only protect him.

    General Antigonos had lead us for many long years. We had
    come through hard times, but our general always brought us
    victory. He was born around the same time as I was, though our
    births were very far from eachother, in a great many ways. He is
    son of the king and will one day, himself, be king of the Hellenes.
    He is a great leader of men. He could get any man to follow his
    lead and then win victories when he took him into battle. The
    only weakness I saw was when he was in the cities. He disliked
    the jobs of managing cities and left much of that work to his
    advisors. His advisors seemed pleased when he did little of this
    work. They did not wish the power for themselves, but prefered
    not to argue with their general when he chose to make decisions.
    They often disagreed with his choices and often had to openly
    appose them to prevent a grave mistake. Fortunately, Antigonos
    was surrounded by loyal and skilled followers.



    On the other side was King Aram, ruler of the Persian Empire.
    They say that it was Aram who lead the war against the Kingdom
    of Babylon during his father's rule. This had started the great war
    we were then still fighting. Aram was said to be a noble leader but
    at times was unable to prevent his generals' horrible acts, such as
    the slaughter of Hellenes when Persia took the great city of
    Seleukeia. When Arams' father died by our army, he did not
    become king of Persia. It was not until his relative and that man's
    son also died by our army that Aram was able to become king.
    In a way, Aram owed his throne to Antigonos, though he also
    owed the loss of his father to Antigonos. Our spies reported that
    King Aram was a wise and well liked leader, but his people were
    growing tired of the war.



    Several days before we to leave Captain Theodas spoke with
    Duratios and I. He told us that we would not be joining the guards
    and would stay behind in the Persian capital. He did not tell us
    why he had chosen this. Later, we talked with another member
    of the guards who had been told the same thing. He was also
    from the land of Thraikia.

    It was natural for Duratios and I to investigate and we asked other
    members of the guards. We found that yet another man had been
    told to say as well. This man was a Hellene, though. We
    discovered that only those who were the Hellenes called
    Makedones had been ordered to accompany the general. It was
    clear that these orders came from Captain Theodas. He did not
    like any person who was not a Makedone, even fellow Hellenes.

    Duratios began to talk of Captain Theodas and was convinced that
    we would soon be forced to leave the royal guard by his orders. I
    did not understand Captain Theodas at that time and decided to
    not worry like Duratios. Duratios later told Kallistratos and he
    agreed with him. Even though Kallistratos was an agent working
    directly for General Antigonos, Captain Theodas had let it be
    known that he wished him replaced. Even though Kallistratos
    was a Hellene, Captain Theodas did not like him.

    The problem came to a quick end by the word of Antigonos.
    General Antigonos did not know of Captain Theodas' orders to the
    guards but ended those orders quickly. A day before he was to
    leave, General Antigonos spoke to me while I on guard. He
    suddenly stopped what he was doing and thought a moment. He
    turned to me and said, "I want you to stay close to me when we
    meet with the Persian king, Tabriqo." He then quickly returned
    to the papers he had on the table. I was honored he personally
    trusted me with his safety, though I had proved I was capible.
    Captain Theodas was in the room and hear this and was not
    happy, but he could no longer order me to remain in the city. All
    of the guard joined Antigonos when we travelled the next day.

    We travelled north across the lands of Persis. When we came
    within sight of the town, the scouting group approached the army
    and reported that there was only a handful of Persian guards in
    the town and no other forces nearby. The scouts left to patrol
    the hills and the small army set up camp where we had stopped.
    Antigonos, his aids, and the royal guards moved forward. There
    were just under twenty of us in the guards. There had been
    several more, but we had not filled our numbers since that time
    a negotiation turned into a fight and Captain Damatrios had died.

    We entered the small town; I forgot what it was named. The city
    was bare. It looked as though no person had lived there for many
    months. In the center of the town, the largest building had several
    Persian guards near it. Captain Theodas and a couple others
    entered the building and came out soon after. Captian Theodas
    reported that there was nobody inside but it had been cleaned up.
    Antigonos, his aids, myself, Captain Theodas, and another guard
    entered the building while the others spread out.

    We sat and waited. "Should the Persian king have not been
    waiting for us here?" one aid asked.

    "Perhaps it is a trap," another suggested.

    "They would not be that stupid," Captian Theodas said brazenly.

    "He seeks to establish an upper hand by having the power over
    the meeting's beginning," Antigonos confidently said. "We shall
    let him have this," he said, taking a drink of wine.

    We waited until midday. One of the royal guards entered the
    room and reported that a small army had approached and a
    small group of men on horses were coming towards the town.
    I checked my sword, bow, and arrows. I was ready for a fight.
    One of the Persian guards entered and confirmed that it was
    King Aram.

    A group of Persian men entered the building shortly. A short
    bearded man wearing an odd hat sat in the center. This man
    was introduced as King Aram, "first king" of the Persian Empire.
    I did not think much of him at first but soon learned he was
    worthy of the great respect he commanded. He proved to be a
    worthy challenge even for the charisma of Antigonos.

    The story of that day and the one that followed is not a story I am
    suited to tell. I spent my time watching every man's slightest
    movement and never letting my guard down. General Antigonos
    and King Aram spoke in the Hellene tongue at great length. I did
    not bother trying to follow what they spoke of. On the first day the
    two men spoke with eachother as though they were two fighters
    circling the other looking for an opening to strike at. By the
    second day they spoke as though they were long time friends.
    Although this friendliness covered a tension even I was aware of.
    It was clear that both sides wished peace but also wished to be
    seen as the victor in this war.

    From what I understood, both the Persians and our forces were
    weakened but both men played as though they had all the power.
    I did not know it, but we were weaker than I had thought that day.
    The reinforcements coming to join us were weak, and the lands of
    Persis, away from the capital, were rioting under our control.

    By dusk on the second day, the two leaders had come to a decision.
    We spent a second night in the army camp outside the city and the
    following day returned the the Persian capital of Persepolis. In the
    city, Antigonos gave a speech to the army, reporting that the war
    was over. The Persian Empire had accepted peace. King Aram
    would end the war and would even convince his fellow Persian king to
    pull back his troops that were marching on Persepolis.



    Antigonos did not believe we could hold the lands of Persis. In order
    to achieve peace, these lands would be returned to King Aram. The
    Hellenes gained some land to the north, though I do not remember
    all of the names of the lands there. The city of Sousa would become
    part of the Kingdom of the Hellenes. I do not recall all of the details,
    I was simply happy that the war was over. I did not know then what
    I was going to do, or if General Antigonos would still need my service.
    But I would soon learn my job was not yet completed.



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    I like it very much. Now how long did that peace last?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Centurio Nixalsverdrus View Post
    I like it very much. Now how long did that peace last?
    Thanks, Centurio.
    How long can one trust the AI? Fortunately, I almost completely destroyed their military. It may take them a while to rebuild.

    That chapter took me longer than I thought it would to write. Finals are coming up, so I may be delayed in the next chapter too. I'll have it done this weekend at the quickest. I haven't decided yet, but the next chapter may be the final one in this story line.


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    Great work MAA as usual

    I must admit I didn't think you would make peace with the Persians, but these twists really add to the story

    Good luck with putting thoose Sabeans under the sand (and with work in RL).
    “Save us, o Lord, from the arrows of the Magyars.” - A prayer from the 10th century.




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    The March West

    As we prepared to leave the city, the army once again began to
    loot the city and its people. The cases were few, but noticeable.
    General Antigonos did not stop them. They were soon joined
    by many of the city's own people. There was no order but there
    was also no chaos.

    Several days after we had returned and announced the new of
    peace, a small Persian army approached the city. They set up
    camp outside the city. The following day we marched out from
    its gates leaving the remaining looting to the people of the city.
    Restoring order was then a task for the Persians.

    General Antigonos was not overconfident with the army's
    security and ordered the scouts to continue searching ahead of
    us as well as the lands we had just left behind us. He did not
    wish to risk being overrun by a Persian army as we slowly
    marched back towards the Kingdom of the Hellenes now that
    we had no stone defenses. There was no attack and the peace
    remained in effect even after the Persians regained control of
    their ancient capital.

    We arrived at the mountains that separated the two once-warring
    kingdoms. This was the second time this army marched over
    them. The army moved slowly over the mountains and to the
    other side of them. Antigonos did not march the army at a rapid
    pace, our supplies were completely secure, and once we had
    reached the place they called the "Persian Gates", we no longer
    even feared a betraying attack by the Persians.

    At the Persian Gates, we finally encountered the rest of the
    reinforcements that had been coming to our aid. When the news
    of peace came, they had halted at the Persian Gates and begun
    the construction of the fortress, by order of Antigonos' father. This
    unbuilt fortress would now mark the extent of influence of the
    Hellenes. The reinforcements which had managed to join us
    in the Persian capital now left the army to join the forces of
    the new fortress.

    Antigonos lead what was left of the depleted army into the lands
    called Elymais and to the city of Sousa. Here, we met with the
    army I had served in so many years earlier. These two depleted
    forces joined together to make an army that was near full strength.
    We would remain in Sousa for a year.


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    Great, as always!

    Are you going to return to the "overview" way of story telling?
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    Very nice MAA. I have enjoyed this AAR very much. Tis a very good read.

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    Thanks.
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    Are you going to return to the "overview" way of story telling?
    Yes, soon...


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    Old Friends

    In the city of Sousa, I met with some of my old friends who had
    joined the Hellenes at the same time as I as mercenary archers.
    Ever since I had joined the Royal Guards, we had grown distant
    and then when Antigonos took command of another army I
    thought I would never see them again. Now we spoke of old
    times as old friends. Several of the men I had known had died
    and a few had deserted the army since the last time but many
    still remained.

    We spoke of our homes back along the Great River and our early
    experiences in the army of the Hellenes. We spoke of the war
    against the Kingdom of Meroe where both us and General
    Antigonos first learned the ways of warfare. It was through my
    old friends that I learned the Kingdom of Meroe had once again
    pushed north and the Hellenes had given up territory. The
    Hellenes had chosen to take defense and give territory that was
    not easy to hold, but this meant that my village would now be
    deep inside Meroe territory.

    When I had left my village, I had thought I would die in battle. I
    had no family left and no land there. It did not matter in what
    country I had been born. I hadn't thought I would return home
    and now, after all that had happened to me, I did not even think
    it was possible. After all I had seen and all I had experienced,
    how could I return to the life of my father in a land that now
    seemed foreign to me?

    Two months after we had come to the city of Sousa, Antigonos
    reorganized the two newly combined armies. Those who had
    served in the army for as long as I had were permitted to leave.
    All of those who had joined with me in the land of the Great River
    were given a sum of money for their service and returned home.
    I said farwell to many of my old friends, not only those from the
    lands I was born but those from Aigyptos and the Hellenes who
    were in the army. The old Hellene who had been my commander
    when I was an archer was given a piece of land in Aigyptos and
    retired from the military entirely.

    General Antigonos busied himself with task such as reorganizing
    the army while his advisers handled the work of managing the
    city of Sousa. Since it had been conquered, it had not had a
    governor and was managed by the military. Now Antigonos'
    advisors were going about the work of transferring control of the
    city from military rule that that of the King of the Hellenes. I did
    not understand this work and Antigonos did not care to deal with
    it. It seemed odd that a man who was destined to rule the
    strongest empire on this world would care so little for the tasks
    of management.


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