The Battle for Sicily and other Casse mini-aars

[the man with no name]

BerkeleyBoi Thanks for reading! I'm hoping on having the next, rather longer installment up within the next few days.

the man with no name Are you saying that there should be more space between paragraphs, pics, etc?

No but that you should use the enter button generously when typing. Look at this guide.

https://forums.totalwar.org/vb/showthread.php?t=117122

[Zim]

I take it you're referring to this section?

In addition to grammer and sentence structure, I once read a thread where someone mentioned using the "Enter" button generously. Obviously, if you paragraphs are long and thick, they can be hard to read and turn off the reader. Try to keep them long enough to be a paragraph, but, do use the "Enter" button generously.

I went through the aar again and the vast majority of the paragraphs are in the 3-4 sentence range, with very few venturing a couple sentences beyond that. I'm not sure whether I can split them much further without rendering the aar less rather than more readable...

I'll see about keeping the sentence length shorter next update. That should result in more frequent, shorter paragraphs.

No but that you should use the enter button generously when typing. Look at this guide.

https://forums.totalwar.org/vb/showthread.php?t=117122

[BerkeleyBoi]

Maybe he means how the AAR was arranged. If you indent it a bit and center everything, it might look better. Check out MAA's for a good example.

[Moosemanmoo]

Pretty cool little AAR, I think I'll give this mercenary faction idea a spin